Okay, so where do we start? The characters? The scene-setting? The hooks? I would say this all together. EVERYTHING IS ON THE POINT. The element needed in a thriller is not just a plot. Good writing is what makes a good thriller a good thriller.
Author-sama. YOU ROCK. Will keep on reading your book in future.
Hello, author here! I have shamelessly given myself a five-star review because I promise you readers won't regret it when you read.
So please stick around and read the chapters to better understand the story. Don't forget to please leave comments and reviews, to clearly state your opinions thank you in advance.
I will try my best to improve and work harder to keep you readers entertained.(⌒▽⌒)☆
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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I finally found a gem, thank you for making this author. If you feature blue lock or something into this I would be a very happy man. But overall I really like this book and it is one of those hidden gems in we novel.
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awaitin release . i just like this kind of underestimated mc face slaps every one vive of novels ..........................................
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mc a simp and that alone makes me hate the novel and if you wondering why I gave it 5 star is because author deletes reviews that show the bad side of his work
Relaxing turned to something of an addiction. Waiting for more chapters, patiently. Definitely love the mismatched family environment and the need of the FLUFFY!
The beginning was good/interesting but the further you read the more tedious it gets. Its not the worst I read but also nothing good. "Meh" would be the best assessment.
I read to the current chaps (21) and the last 5 were hard for me to read since everything is just either dumb or contradictory. The main problem for me is that there is NO harem in the story. While I like slow burn novels, this one is a glacier.
What makes it worse is the MC and his weird shift of personality when he starts to simp one of the girls in the story.
The story has potential and honestly intrigued with the synopsis once I've read it. Recommendable book! Looking forward for more, Author. Keep it up!