Interesting... But this novel reminds me of a novel called the Reincarnation of the strongest sword God, by Lucky old cat. It looks similar regarding levels, tiers, equipments and others.
Either way, it's interesting please continue
everything about the novel is great except I don't see a lot of romance doesn't he have charm there are plenty of novels out there but people lose interest when finding out there's no female characters interested in the protagonist
its pretty good and entertaining but... a homunculus as mc is not my cup of tea...so yeah I'm off... I'll be back again if I am too bored and there is no other better novels or books to read... gluck.
I liked the plot, world building but hated all the plotholes. Its not good to dumb down characters just to make dramatic. Commanders cant even use their assets right in an operations inspite having a lot of them. Redundancy and irrelevance are wasted on some of the chapters.
Well the starting was good as i see it but the introduction are nowhere to be seen. I do like system novels but here the cat is giving him system and it kinda changes his personality completely. Feels like of chained.....maybe my review is not wrong so I would suggest you read it and don't think but about my review
Normal person become leader of Otaku group.^^
Survive outside safe zone.
Build your dream land and alive with your family.
Got the kid and mutated pets.
I am Steven and I really like your book and I'm waiting on your next chapter. I am interested in your book and I want to show all my viewers it. I want to publish your book on my webnovel. I'm here asking permission.
Bro please continue this novel this is too good to be abandoned
Hello everyone, author here, finally writing a self-review to promote my novel.
This is my first book, and I must say I am finding it more and more fun to write and make the stories in my heard and in my life that I have experienced either through myself or through the people that surround me come alive for you.
I always wanted to write a book like Haruki Murakami - a very realistic yet at the same time tackling some profoundly deep psychological issues, problems in relationships etc.
There are so many messages that I am trying to convey through this book to the readers and I thought what's the better way of doing that than writing something inspired from my own very life.
I am very humbled by the response and will continue to be stable and steady with my writing.
I also want to apologize to the readers again for not being able to write more than 3 chapters per week. I am a teenager and I have a lot of other things to do, plus writing and editing alone take around 3 to 4 hours of my time. Not only that, I have to plan out the story in advance so that the novel remains consistent or get better as it progresses, develop backstories and stuff so that I have an idea on where I am taking my characters to. I don't want to lose focus on any character at all. All of them deserve focus and a role to play in the story, even if it's a minor role.
You have excellent grammar and your story has a good storyline. Please continue with your novel since it will be interesting to see how your main characters develop. [img=recommend]
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it's so beautiful I love ur book and ur story is amazing ? more story please ?? I'm one of ur fan , I'm so excited to read ur next chapter . tc god bless ?