can you please fasten the story development and fixe the da*n MC mentality
The start is very good. The plot looks promising.The writing quality is nice.Supporting you, AUTHOR All I want is -''More chapters''?''More Chapterssssss''??"More chapterssssssssss"???
interesting.
Highly recommend this book, very enjoyable. Characters are comedically at points and feel realistic to an extent. The idea of video game world alongside real world is always a + for me. Character development is slow, but reasonably so being a new game without much information on it and the real has interesting developments as well which are slightly quicker. The abilities are unique and the MC is not overpowered. The only downside being the very slow release rate and the minimal amount of reviews/readers. I do hope this book continues, but I can see it coming to a halt due to lack of support by the community.
What else can I say? Just read this for laughs.
The propaganda and heavy nationalism ruined another great novel...
Honestly, as much as I enjoyed it, I think it'd been better if they made the sister his real blood relative and add the necklace as a family heirloom. That'd be a lot more interesting as it'll add plot (Which story is missing)
Romance: I like it, it's very chill but at the same time feels too perfect. Honestly I'm not sure but if this were a manga I think I'll love her even more.
I don't want to see this as a military novel since MC way to sincere. I love his gentleness but the warmth and fluff in this novel is too much that seeing blood is like incompatible with it.
Action packed fights, intense training scenes, and interesting cultivation methods, are all things you won't find in this story. The translation itself is a slog to read through, partially due to the overly flowery language and content of the source material. So far 47 ch in, there has been many more pgs dedicated to poetry that doesn't translate well, or at least hasn't been, than pgs of fighting, cultivating, and learning combined. I feel like author is trying to show off how cultured he is. The fights are very bland as far as I can interpret from the confusing translation. Mc suddenly get good at techniques without any on screen training or exploration of the technique itself. This does have some potential, Mc is interestingat least, but potential was squandered by poor translating and writing.
Just because of the description and the first chapters I am already interested in this novel
Love the story and the main character. Few writing mistakes here and there but overall pretty good. The flow of the story seems to be at a good pace to me with a enough story building and action mixed in well.
if you are looking for a story with developments, this is not the choice, this book is a little tedious, it is a monologue of Mc with everything else. I want, I take it, I feel like it, I do it, I have it, I realize it. There is nothing surprising, just a lazy mc who chooses op power to make a harem.
Good Stuff MATTTEEEEEEEE!
Writing quality; could have some improvements but my English ain't all that good anyway.
Stability of updates; I don't really care, as long as chapters are released frequently. Obviously, real life isn't that simple in which someone can easily release chapters daily.
Story development; I like.
Character design; I like a lot. Muscle Men and Bald Bros for life.
World background; pretty good, it's basically modern with just slightly more advanced technology.
I think the story is pretty good even if the protagonist seems kinda dumb sometimes, its still worth your time, i havent finished it yet, but the story seems interesting so far.
This story has a pretty good system, that I'm surprised that no one else has thought of it. The story is like most system stories, which is cool and all. But the thing that makes me want to continue reading this is the system. I haven't read any system stories as of late, and this might be able to scratch my itch. Thanks, author for sharing your story.