John_Ciner
damm. This is a really beautiful novel that has a very light comedy tone. The author played the story very well from the first few chapters alone. The other people might be annoyed by the system because it just exists for comedy purposes. The system is like a rebellious teenager. That is just my first impression of this novel. Just great.
where are the new chapters,he has to upload for 4 months and he didn't say anything,cmon dude you are on premium.dont make your readers wait so much
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It's one of the best stories that I have read and it's well written with good plot and story development. Thanks for everything, your time, hard work,etc.
its a breeze of cool spring amidst the hot dessert. Really worth reading as it refreshes you after reading so many novels. I really look forward to future developments. Hope it keeps up the standard. Less fighting, less cultivation, clever scheming, thrilling storyline. Well I am loving it.
Controversial review: This novel is not a military novel. For it to be a military novel, there should be girls who turn into battleships or girls who turn into rifles. All in all, thoroughly disappointed.
the story is filled with fillers it's not even funny anymore.4k+ chapters in and the mc is still a loser, he can't even control the very organization he build for himself. lol
is the story abandone by the author??? What was the plot ??
hmm. where is Harry's story?
don't care for this book. just cannot get into reading it
Just LOVED every single one of these books!! So worth the read!! Hope you all enjoy them as much as I did!!
a great read
