Hi guys, I’m writing between 1 and 2 chapters a day, I’m a student at university and I have a part time job on the side so I can’t do anymore. Anyway if you could drop by and leave me a review, good or bad as long as it’s constructive I’ll take it and try to become better using your advices. You can also comment on the chapters I do my best to answer every one of them.
Ok, I am just genuinely impressed with the writing quality here. As an English major, I've been stuck reviewing so many books that have such a trash writing quality that I literally wanted to rip my hair out, but guess what? This book is literally perfect in the sense that it has no spelling or grammar mistakes at all, truly impressive. Now, off of that topic, the story development and character design are good so far, but not anything too special and the world is somewhat the same as some other novels, so I'm waiting to see if there will be some uniqueness that the writer can come up with. Overall, a good read that I would casually recommend.
It started off really good [ OP Mc, Arrogant Mc, Cruel and ruthless but not a psycopath]. But, there was not a much of plot line or any twists or surprises in story. He saves some important people [to control them] and helps them. If enemy were strong, he uses arrays to hide then cultivates in short period and then kills the enemy.---- this scene repeats itself again and again.Story was extremely focused on MC, that after 70 or 80 Chapters it becomes so boring. Even then there miniscule dialogues for MC, They are 'they are ants', 'just you', 'what can you do' like these.My review is only upto ch158. Maybe it was better later, I Hope.
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This is an early review as i just started it & currently at chapter 25. (I did not read the Auxiliary Volume, i went straight to the story to see the actual build of the story within the content of the chapters)I find the story is paced too fast at the beginning & makes it chaotic as the MC is just starting in the new life with no real knowledge of who they are now & the author just jumps around with different sudden interactions to create plot points. The MC at times is oblivious without common sense & not trying to find out more details about this new world or to speak up, but yet acts on impulse with creating interactions that create issues. MC acts like people are too dangerous to stand up to question/interact with them, but then with one person they decide she wants to fight them to see how powerful they are.I will keep reading & hope this is just some hurdles as the author is trying to setup this story with their ideas & readers input & can make it more steady as their direction becomes more solid. I will reevaluate my review as i get further in & redo my review to how it is going IMO.
if u asked me to find the difference between a bot and Mc I would say that they are both the same. Mc has zero character development, zero world building. I tried till 20.ch can't read any further.
You should get ch 1 to 114 on here somehow Cause i want to start reading it but dint rly want to go on another site cause i like qidan app a lot lol...
would love to read this..........I love novel with this kind of genre.it's awesome . ????????????????????????✔️✔️✔️
The mc is good and not stupid or arrogant, the "cheat" need him to work for the rewards and the world background isn't really original but it's really hard because a lot have already been used before.But the author like to repeat himself a lot and it's a little annoying so only 4stars.
I really like this book but author is not posting updates....
Fuc its too shallow
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