Lord_Raven
Raws English name should be: After pretending to be bankrupt I got kicked out of the chat group on faloo
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typical hiding M.C...if u jst keep on hiding why are you getting angry...u are a trillionare why are u still going to class ??? #DONT READ #DONT READ #DONT READ #DONT READ
Loving the novel so far... Good to see the MC embrace a unique cultivation usually reserved for minor characters... Hope he adopts a unique fighting style not the common ones (swords, spears, daggers & bows)... That would increase its uniqueness and make the MC a bit unique..
The books got a decent start. I love how the author leaves us every chapter with a question that keeps us curious.
The story looks promising. the description and the elaboration makes h imagine the story in front of ur eyes.
Great story line.
all the best author.
The name and artwork looks promising,
The translation quality is IMMORTAL LEVEL , as in INVISIBLE
Story development and the very story is also INVISIBLE.
This is by far the most "Heavenly" Novel in this website ,
Sadly the heavens don't exist and so this novel is also such a "UNFORESEEN" material
IT is Slow and non progressive novel. Read better novel with same concept
it has flawed foundation. Every thing MC say or do is right no matter how illogical. It is all so racist and call racial slang/curse to Korean & Japaneses people, will mocking India GODS in deeming ways. I am embarrassed to have read such a dirty piece of work. Shame on you for translating a novel of a bigot & racist.
Hello, Wolfy here.
Most of the reviews are mostly true. About the start of the stroy anyway.
The novel is HUGE, what I've done is just a glimpse of an iceberg. Kindly jump to the back a bit, you may find something that is "not so boring". The author didn't write a novel with 20+ million word count while boasting about the MC from start to end.
Annnd sorry for the slow speed. As said, I'm not a contracted translator! The spare time I can spend on this voluntary work is really limited.
Regards.
I don't see any harem there?,.,.,.,.,.,.,.,.
the idea of the story, the plot, and the world background make this story awesome to read but the writing quality become so bad coz so much mismatch naming and inconsistency in using one name. hope in the next chapter it will get better. keep it up
The book is great. Really enjoying this book
I recommend a proofreader for this novel because the writing is downright horrible, however I commend the author for the superb story!! I got hooked the moment I started reading this!!!
Writing this halfway through Volume 1 - Part 2!!
Sooo, I'm pretty happy with how the book is going so far! There have been a couple of rewrites, so the quality should be pretty high for a Webnovel! But, better than that, as the book goes on, it gets better (trust me!)
Thing start off a little slowly, as we build the world, but once it gets going, it reaaaallly gets going. There's a lot of potential where things are now, so I hope you'll make it to as far as I've written! I've had a lot of fun writing it.
