This novel had a good start and even though any trouble is delt with by the system and this novel has no suspense at all, it is written in a way that makes it enjoyable to read.
Because the story itself and the characters are very flat the novel focuses on two things. The individual scenes and the reaction of the world around it.
The reactions of the world might look nuanced at first, but they are stupidly repetitive at times. Therefore the focus is directed on subtly criticism of the real world school system, education bias and the skewed world fiew of older generations. Simply put, the current school system does not suit the future job marked and living environment.
For example, the gaming industry is huge and a great opportunity for those with talent, just like other sports, but we hardly ever see schools support it in the way they support other sports.
The individual scenes mostly depend on a summoned character, a famous person from a parallel world. This is were I have to draw a line. The author did not do his research, the people he summons are very famous, but he often has trouble pinpointing the reason for their fame and differentiate it from what they are actually good at.
For example: G. R. R. Martin is a famous author, but what made him famous is decidedly not, as stated in this novel, his ability to tell a story from multiple perspectives . Martin is a master of world building and overarching and very compelling story lines. He uses multiple perspectives in his books, mostly because his narrators die often, but it is decidedly not something special to do that and he is not even remotely famous for it. It was genuinely hard for me to think of something Martin is less proficient at, precise and consice descriptions, Martin loves going on long tangents and is kind of infamous for drawing out scenes in his book.
I don't particularly like this novel, I really dislike some of the characters summoned and their lack of personality. They mostly feel misrepresented. But I like that the author tries to critique the current educational standards.
As vezes eu gosto de ler histórias como essa pra descontrair.
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Enjoyable to read but felt a little dry at the start but the human element comes out slowly. Cold blooded killler MC does not equal instant emotional character, so im thinking it's intentional. OP ability from the start that's cheesy but before long it works out to a cool factor. I keep expecting a John Wick type of set up, but not at the 40 chapters point. Translation has a couple of fumbles with a few gender switches and maybe 2 wrong names used. I've seen less errors than in most printed popular books. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Great story, solid world building, unique but solid concepts, interesting characters, unique locations ........
Really looking forward to the updates.
Interesting premise with a good writing quality. The pacing is also good, not too fast or slow. The world building is also detailed enough for easier visualization, but what I liked the most were the character interaction. I have only read about 7 chaptere, but kudos to the author for doing a great job.
Overall, 10/10. Will come back for more chapters when it’s about 50 or so ^^
Nice concept and plot, romrcommended to anyone who likes to read and is enjoyable and relaxing. I hope you make it to your writing career....................
nicely done. I really like novels where the mc is not a human.
The way the author wrote this book is very amazing!. Im hoping for more chapters!!
Nice novel in the world
I will realy like this novel
Pls vote for Yahya nizar
Congratulations Yahya nizar
...I now get why there are no reviews. Anyone who has self esteem wouldn't be able to endure this novel and the thing is, even degenerates like me have self esteem. Although some people would enjoy the self realised stereo type characters, the author took it abit too much. I enjoyed the MC getting insulted at first but things quickly got boring after like 5 chapters and become annoying very quickly. A very strange novel in my opinion. The author probably is trying to improve his story telling skills since it has potential but not quite there for readers to enjoy the novel long term.
haisss it didn't get picked