Alright this is actually a decent fanfic. No system, no ludicrous wish fulfilment nonsense.There are a few flaws though. The first is that you obviously do not proofread. The second is that your attention to standard writing rules is half assed : You do not start your sentences with capitals, you write numbers with symbols instead of letters. Lastly, sometimes it gets a little too much with other’s reaction of the main character deeds. Many times I have found myself half sighing/cringing when I read Hiruzen thinking "how is he this good oh my god ??". No. He is Hiruzen Sarutobi, he has seen Jounin level seven year-old before and all kind of prodigees through his decades of kagedom. Get that fixed, and your story will level up in quality greatly. I wish you the best !
Still waiting and hoping that the author continues this novel. It is amazing and there are barely any other novels on this site that are on the same level. This novel is superior to the other ones the author is writing and currently releasing. I do not understand why he stopped writing this one.
It's a great action-packed novel filled with interesting characters. The storyline is also interesting and not one moment is dull. Its background setting and description are also one of its strong points.
Came for Tigers, didn't expect the bigotry. Way too much Nationalism. I mean how is there so much Nationalism in a story about animals? This story could have been a lot better.
Why is this out of the trial list. I think this book deserved a shot plus I pay some good coins for the chapters and I would pay more to see it goes 24 chapter a week
Honestly, I have absolutely loved your other books, so I have no doubts that this is one with insane potential and that you can use all of its potential CORRECTLY. Although I dropped Against Heaven's Will, it was still a great book. I hope you don't drop this like you did Chameleon: My True Face. Also, a petition to please bring back Chameleon: My True Face.
Cluck u chicken, love this novel keep it up. I'm waiting to binge it due to it being so good.
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I only have one thing to say and one thing only - from ch 6 to chapter 17 there was no plot development, there was 2 chapters wasted on the "enemy" inner monologue which consisted of - "I'm better, how dare this commoner argue with me, how dare he look at "my" women" and so on.
a fight was supposed to happen on ch 6 and didn't happen as of now and it's ch 18...
Another cliched harem novel..Really fed up with these as there are arleady a lot of these on the site that have been read and dropped.
Its basically mc arrives helps beautiful women get in trouble with their pursuers and then use them as stepping stone.
this novel is amazing i love everything about it and recommend this to anyone that is into cultivation/reincarnation type of novel after every chapter i read i just cant stop wanting more i just hope that the author doesnt drop it.
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
Novel is nice, i like it very much. He takes both china and the rest of the world by storm whit his products. Has quite a lot of face slapping. Only thing i really hate about is, is that MC is a arrogant dickhead who treatds women like toys that has only one purpose, to please him. His now sleeping whit 2 women on same time, and has a third one who hes sending letters to, most likely will sleep whit her to when he finally meets her face to face. That makes it 3 women he sleeps whit at the same time, while one of the women is the one he wants to marry, and he keeps telling her how much he loves her, but moment she turns her back to him, he runs of to **** other women. And btw the other woman he fucks is a underaged (14-15years) girl so kinda a girl (child) and not a woman. And the woman he wants to marry is so god damn perfect, he dosent deserve her at all. I hope she finds out about him cheating on her and dumps him.