Well thank you very much for the story we still need to fill to the limit
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the story is pretty good. As long as you don't make him a hero risking his life for someone he don't even know I will support you. and I don't think he feels anything for the village even if they didn't do anything bad to him they didn't help him either so I think he won't save the village if its destroyed.
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it takes a werido turn with the MC development because it makes home seem real real dumb. I couldn't even finish is before I got tired of his bs
A unique and nice novel, the grammar is good, couldn't find any mistakes. The story is developing in a satisfactory phase, which is not too slow or not too fast, keeping readers like me engaged. The sci-fi plot is amazing, I liked the mc, and the other side characters introduced till now. I will be rooting for the novel!