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great story update please
please the whole switching the he/she is very confusing!
Average but the worst is the English version… low writing quality, its kind of disappointing
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Maybe I do not know how to count but I'm not posting 5 chapters a week, being 2 or 3...T-T
Pls more ;-;..
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REALLY hope this one gets picked, since it has major potential. Also I dunno if it's true that the translator skipped content but what ever! If you can't find the whole, deal with the cut and sliced half!
I'm so sad. It was so good. The first 352 chapters are a fairly "original" take on the give disciples things get stronger genre. It was fun and I greatly enjoyed reading it.
HOWEVER, from chapter 353 it is a copy and paste of "The Most Generous Master Ever". Blatantly. There are only small changes like names and some references to his past disciples and his system.
wasn't bad till the last 100 chapters, it was unreadable and occasionally got random chapters from other novels show up
A very good read so far. I have gone far and currently reading the raws. The simulations are very intelligently used. One of the good things about this novel, is that the plot never gets stale. Definitely supporting for it to be picked.
Very slow paced and uninteresting story.
I could only read about 30 chapters before dropping, and most of them felt like a chore to read.
In these 30 chapters the MC woke up, went to his uncle, trained and that's it.
Nothing special happens and there's too much out of place info dump.
It's a cultivator world but so far everything is mundane. Almost no 'supernatural' at all.
There's also a lot of bull**** reasonings.
If you tell me someone has magic hands and can heal sickness in a magic world, it's fine and I accept it. But if the author tells us that the MC can resuscitate a drowned kid that has been dead for more than 8h with moja sticks and without magic using Tradicional Ancient Medicine from earth... I'll call it bull**** and bad worldbuilding.
The story is also undecided. It's a cultivation world but the Mc wants to make gunpownder? Things should be magical but he fixes things with TCM? It makes no sense.
For last, the writing is too verbose, with long paragraphs that could be shortenned a lot without losing any content.
Don't waste your time on this. It's just bad.
I've read 60+ chapters. I'm just uncomfortable with characters that have this much class, they're all so "Sophisticated." I can't relate. Like there's a fine line between a gentleman and a nerd with money showing off to attract more so...
Just starting out but the writing style is unique. Want to see how this story develops.
The first time I read the synopsis, I was immediately attracted to this novel. Personally, I'm not too interested in the other series because of the concept of the system and also the character development which is quite emotional. but I see a new light in this novel. I hope this novel will be better than the previous series.
