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Harriett proposition seemed to be as good as any so he agreed with a nod. She rose up from her chair and slowly walked up to the door of her room before stopping and turning around to call out to him again.
great story please update
"Yes. You have almost understood the things which are learned by me after a lot of contemplation. You can not see those things but you can sense them when you are nearing to the stage of abstraction." Veer smiled and said while caressing the hair of Arya.
John I truly want to beat you? how dare you interrupt this monent?
"Why is the unit headed by the Deputy Commander?" whispered Lie to Tony, who was lined up next to him.
and i would evade it truly is two birds with one stone keke
I think this is a fanfic of Perfect World. Funny.
So intriguing Thumbs up to the writer your a pro
not that bad actually but I am not an expert or something ?
author are you kidding me? what are you doing extending chapters like you are gonna write 10000 . you are making it soo boring . even though im holding my anger back its so annoying . mc is weak af. i thought there was multiple planets, which means there is 100 star people. mc is struggling at 3 star. something that needs 2 chapter max is extended to 20 chapter..... the h is this
Worst fanfic i read in a while :( The mc got 3 systems but barely use them,he got gamer mind but it doesn't work at all,11 years since he is reborn but barely trained, follow totally the canon story(30 chapters and the only thing different is saving the mother of luna...),don't use is brain at all(know all the major plot of the hp universe but don't prepare at all(troll)),i could keep going but the last thing i will write is it's the worst mc i ever read about(1000+ fanfic read). Iusually don't write review but i take the time to write this one to tell people to never start reading this *****. Don't lose your time, you can find a lot better to pass time, and don't listen to the author who tell you that only the 20 first chapter are like this , it's all the f***ing story ...
I was intrigued by this novel's description. But then I read all the reviews. Not gonna read it anymore.I am looking for something good to read. Not your typical Chinese novels with cliché MC and piss poor cliché plots. So if anyone knows something like that. Please comment.
