Sabaroth_zarkiel
it was OK until his personality named the god of magic took over the mc. Then the story was a mess, and I dropped it there. the reason why was he destroyed all that he was working for if this other personality was not there this novel could have been 2000 or 30000 chapter long but all I see was a perfectly good story ruined by story and character development I'm sad because I was realy like the story development before the magic god personality existed.
I run across this while looking up the Manwa version. I cannot believe it so different. I enjoy it. Ye Xuanis so mysterious that people wonder who he is. He also state his just an ordinary Elder from a small Sect in a forgotten corner of the country, which suprised people and they don't believe it. The miracle that he performed all are Heaven Defining shocking people to point that they even think he is a saint in disguise. the funny when it make a call back to "Battle though the heavens
trash with bad plot and awful translation
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didn’t reach 10th chapter because:writing is of bleeding eyes quality. story development is not natural at all, mc find a mineral and oh! the new customer need just that. character design, mc is a fool. he sell thing at stupid low price when he went to search everywhere to find price of everything. Even when customers are surprised he don’t understand. also first customer is an arrogant young master who suddenly become an heavenly bootlicking dog for mc.wont add more, my rating is not me spamming 1* everywhere but real result of each point. maybe things go better later but i didn’t reach there
I cannot soeak on update stabilty as I started after completion. Overall it was a decent book, the character and world develooment could use a bit of work but is not terible. Personallt, it felt like the story was a bit repetive with the focus being on the recipies and cooking proccess more than the people and world.
I really can't express how good this novel is. I've been following this since translated chapter 10, and it's been great the whole way. I can't find anything wrong with the story and it's literally one of the best stories out there. I'll try to make it short this time, since it's just so good it doesn't really need any criticism. Here's why:Translation Quality: Qidian, always has some of the best translations (as expected). They choose all their translators well, and the translator for I'm Really A Superstar, makes good translations. The poems and songs and etc. were all translated well and have great quality. I wouldn't believe it if you said you found a mistake in grammar. If you did, I'm 100% sure it was very minor.Updating Stability: The updating stability is great, the chapters are given to you at a reasonable pace and quality, and most of the time, more chapters are given then said. The stability has basically never been thrown off course, and the schedule has always been followed.Story Development: The plot, is unique. The idea might be something common, but the way the author takes it and manages it makes it unique. The story never has a dull moment (other than fillers), and makes you curse for all the cliffhangers.Character Design: All the characters that appear often and are named have distinct personalities, and even a few hundred chapters later they still appear in some way. They aren't boring and they all develop, (even the antagonists).World Background: Most of the information is taken from real life, but that makes the world unique and more realistic, as most stories don't do that. The world changes and develops and makes sense, and you can easily perceive the developments and changes that are happening.That is all, this review is probably one of my short ones, because the reviews get shorter the better the novel is. I recommend and rate this story as a 5.0, full stars. I hope you enjoy reading this!
So many good novel to read. reincarnated and martial arts. hoping for new fast updates to all novels. this is one of the best novel i read so far.
1)Качество письма - 5.2)Обновление стабильности - 5.3)Развитие сюжета - 3.4)Дизайн персонажа - 35)фон мира - 2.6)Общая оценка - 3.1) Quality of writing - 5. 2) Stability update - 5. 3) Plot development - 3. 4) Character design - 3. 5) background of the world - 2. 6) Overall rating - 3.
Completely captivated me! If you are looking for a passionate and blood-riling read filled with a big slap of humor, this could be it. Ye Xiu's overthrow from his throne of glory has killed me, when bonds that should have been considered unbreakable are broken. But the thirst for victory and glory has kept his spirit intact and pushed him forward, to usher a new era for himself. You feel and look in anticipation at Ye Xiu's climb, slowly see the piecing together of his goal. As he faces the rough bumps of his road, watch him push through using his experience, smarts, and hilariously, direct personality. Tear up in sadness and pride, as you see other pro gamers and Ye Xiu trade their everything for their team's future. Piece together unwritten bonds and relationships as the past of each character is revealed. Enjoy the heart-pounding-ness and exhilaration of winning, as though the achievements in the story are your own. Hear your heart break, at the burdens some carries. And watch as Ye Xiu struggles from an abyss to the heavens!I personally think this story would resonate more with athletes or people who wholeheartedly competed/competes. Since they would understand what it means to throw one's self to bask under the light of victory. It's always in their hearts what it means to keep finding another goal and surpass it. But generally, I think everyone would enjoy the journey of Ye Xiu's ascent to his rightful throne.
This story is good, but it seems like it being drawn out a bit to much. I will continue to read since I already invested so much time & money in it. My only problem now is the the privilege chapters I paid for weeks ago is the only chapters the are giving me the options of again. I purchased all the chapters up to 1448. I just privilege again & should be reading from chapter 1449 but insted it's taking me back to 1429. I hope that it is fixed soon.
Please update faster, I am in love with the book.
