End of Volume 1 review:Both setting and world building are intriguing and told in a way that blends in the story. Slowly building up everything along the plot and not impeding the flow of the storytelling.The plot is well thought and well planned from the beginning to end. So far the whole volume is cohesive and not episodic. Every detail is connected and not wasted.Characters are always thinking, plotting and motivated in each of their own. They don't feel like being there just to prove that the MC is awesome. You can feel that each of them have their own story to tell. They have their own purpose and their actions tell you who they are.MC's character, background and motivations are well established. He isn't bumbling around doing stuff just because. He is the calculative and plotting type MC and not a typical "goody two shoes trust everyone has a good side" MC. He learns to fight in the new power system and doesn't really defeat higher tier opponents through brute force. In a way the power tier system is maintained and he doesn't defeat enemy just because of system. The system helps him grow stronger faster than normal but so far that's it.Great web novel so far.
Heck yeah this novel is a little rough but in a good way I see that it has a lot of potential and I can see this going a lot of different ways but I hope the author does not go the (evil sect name but good actually path)
Good story, but it kinda put me down when one of his disciple die in his own sect, when the MC was actually in the same place, and know there are enemy in his own backyard but to late to safe his disciple, he cannot protect the disciple even though he own the most powerfull system building sectOkay, i know that the MC was still weak and that accident might get the MC more determined to get stronger, but i don't know just don't like the kind of story that sacrifice someone just to get MC more determined or more stronger just for that kind of reason.But if you can ignore that kind of story then this novel was actually quite good, but for me, i am gonna drop it
10/10 This novel is a great read, the earlier chapters are pretty misleading for how good it eventually becomes however. The further you get the more entertaining it becomes to read, the mc becomes increasingly more interesting as he hides his true nature behind a guise of arrogance. The overall grammar is pretty great as well, with only a few minor errors here and there. Overall I’d recommend this novel to any fan of transmigration novels.
I have to praise the author since he pulled me into a high fantasy world where the magic system is interesting. It was slow pace at start then later it picked up on the rhythm.I also like the quotes at the beginning of the chapters.There were just minor grammatical errors such as missing periods, and comma were being used instead of period. But thi can be fixed later on. Keep up the good work!
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I was reading a story, but really I was watching an epic action packed movie being played out before my eyes! Loved how well developed the characters are as well as the world they're apart of. A definite endorsement to keep reading, I know I will ;)
This book almost makes me actually want to play League of Legends. Almost... Not really. It is a really good read. The main character is pretty relatable and every match is interesting.
it' a great novel, but author can you tell me, why have you it stopped updating
The writing was captivating The characters were believable and I cared about them The plot had so many twists and turns I couldn't put the book down.
Woahhhhhhhhh duudddddddddddddee this is really interesting. And its released frequent enough so I'm happy with that. I actually read the chinese too, so im happy to see it getting translated
Certainly a part of top 3 novels in qidian . Hope we get more weekly reviews! Im at chapter 300 now. Cheers from Brazil, Ceará, Fortaleza. This 140 characters things minimum is boring.