Thk for updating.
Pls update soon!! Cant wait to read next chapter...
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Boring.. Trash.. No excitement on this novel.. Very plain... Mc Forcing building its own territory.. The title must not LORD OF THE MAGICAL BEAST but LORD OF THE MAGICAL BUGS...
Good story. You should post more. I mostly like the world background and the different attitudes of the characters towards the MC causing that minute change in him. It's cool and very refreshing to read something which by the way it's going, depicts more of human nature towards the disabled and lower class in society with a blend of fantasy.
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Very good writing, and it’s still improving with time. Story is very enjoyable as well, with a good balance between comedy and seriousness at all time. It may not totally deserve (for now) the 5 stars I gave it, but I think it deserve more visibility and I’m sure a lot of people are going to enjoy it. (P.S: author is goated asf?)
I love the way you wrote the story. Keep going, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Good luck[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
As the other fans/readers said, it is an amazing book, i also love how the girl gave the boy another chance, even though she was hurt a lot of times, keep it up, author~
Tbh it's an alright story. Very cringy in places tho. At some points, it makes it seem a bit more real but then instead of learning from it. It happens again and again.
The main thing that is making me drop is the whole heaven, bad luck thing. I mean I get it I really do but you don't have to mention it and go on and on about it every single chapter.
Plus it's used in the most random ways just to make you remember again that it is there. Like when he was chasing the bandits, It was funny. He was having fun. He was heading to the city anyway, and this is just fun on the way. But then it is made out that it was heaven affecting him??? WTF how??? how will chasing bandits along the road you already have to walk affect his cultivation or will?
As long as he remembers his goal and strives for it, he can do whatever tf he wants. Just because he isn't moaning and complaining about it and isn't focusing on breaking free 24/7 doesn't mean it will weaken his will... It's honestly annoying to read about every chapter.
Then you have how can heaven even atk him like these situations... It was made out very clearly that all heaven would do is not give him luck. Okay so in random situations it is always the worst case. SO how is heaven making him chase bandits? It shouldn't be able to do that...
Plus, how will heaven even affect the mc's luck? We call it luck but luck shouldn't be a concept to heaven. Also, if the mc always had no luck then he wouldn't survive at all. Bad luck is like when he is cultivating something can go wrong and die. Never find love etc
It will be impossible for the mc to even live let alone cultivate. Also if heaven is fair why is it taking the luck of the family? It killing random people, animals etc trying to kill the mc. How would that be fair to the other people and animals????
It would be much better if heaven was made out to be a person. Cause then everyone saying heaven is fair is clearly lying cause it's not...
Very good so far. i like how the mc is thinking things through and isnt doing things without thinking about the consequences. :) keep up the great work.
The novel has a good plot and is promising . The writer is successful in appealing to the readers . At last the novel is overall good and will desperately wait for the next chapters to come .
Qidian has turned self aware
Also first
Is this a huge harem?
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Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?
Is this a huge harem?