Another novel with a piece of trash mc. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm
if we exclude main character,this trash is somhow readable.MC character is worst.up until i have read,he is a scum and no dignity.ASSAULTING woman like its his right.as for story,up untill now there is no plot or anything.just let heroine go,do mission and assault.
story is good, promising, has got potential, worth giving a try.... wat else to type ??? ugh? still not enough? i see...... well give this novel a chance
AI writing is to heavy.can you use AI just as assistan not tools?it made reader sick when reading.If you write books like that you will banned you know?
Do not drop this. Good luck making your goals a reality.
I find the plot of story to be interesting enough to read it. However, I feel as if the translations has been done through GOOGLE resulting in very poor grammer, mismatch of the words, etc.
Due to these errors, I hate to say it but I can give this novel a maximum rate of only 3.6 star.
I would recommend the author to translate the chapters manually or simply use GOOGLE translation along with the help of your friends if you cannot hire a translator.
I love this auther so much by far my auther. I would reccomend his Blue phoenix's cultivation series on kindle as I can honestly say it is far better than anything else.
The work needs to be proofread. It's readable but there's a lot of run on sentences. Also some thoughts needs to be organised. Simple errors can be avoided and I understand that english is not the first language of the author. This work needs polishing and I hope it can shine brighter in the future.
i've gotta ask who the hell make these covers??? they all look the same, hope he gets paid their worth coz he owns half of webnovel's monetized works.
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It sucks...it was good at first so thumbs up to that
This is what I cell a interesting novel Description and I hope the novel won't disappoint us
Guys please tell me if you like this story,soon I will update season 2 of this story,between I am the author of this story(can't believe I am asking them voting for my own story)