I have a feeling about something that is being hinted in the novel but I don't want to spoil, if are here to read reviews so you can start the novel... well my review is that the novel is perfect for a first time author.
I didn't know it was here too.
this place is kinda perfect for this book though.
of course, this goes without saying that this is a good book.
Go read it.
This is one of the great novel i have seen so far, even better than most in my library.
Our MC is so strong, not super OP, the style of this author won't allow him to be too strong.
Remember, only few of main characters are idots, even most of young master of random great clan has brains.
For the romance, i hope you don't annoy the progress since you gonna feel like flip the table and yell out 'f**k'
It's very long too, it has around 2700+ chaps.
Good luck
i was enjoying this story so far but now that it isnt free anymore I must drop it. I dont have the money to put in this, life is hard unfortunatly
Overall, the book has a decent start [review as of chapter 70]. Below I have my take on good and bad. Author, thank you for taking the time to create!
Good:
1) Fights are well described and easy to visualize
2) Author does a good job of showing when MC is being smart and when he just thinks he is being smart
3) Best friend character is not "Fatty*" [seriously this is worth a whole star]
4) So far, his motivations are not due to any annoying tropes like sick family, unreasonable desire for revenge, kidnapping, etc., which I find to be an amazing deviation for usual
Bad:
1) His parents really, really suck. Now you might say that since they are shown that they care about the MC they are good parents, but they did absolutely nothing to train him. In a world where power is everything, going to a good school requires being a good fighter, they refused to train him. If that is not neglect, I do not know what is. They are actively risking his life for no reason. MAYBE, the 4 star general dad had an excuse that he could not personally do it since he was busy, but they are rich enough and have powerful friends, I am sure they could find someone to help. During a training arc, someone has to explain basic, crucial terms to him. He was not even told what things mean, I mean how awful can you be that you cannot even provide your son a glossary.
2) To me, it is/was a mystery how strong each of the commandments are. Let alone what happens when you switch. So far, we know you can get new abilities, increase talent etc., but that was not explained at once, it took like 40 chapters for definitions of power to make any sense. There are characters described as being 2nd commandment fighters. Okay, so, is that strong, middle level, apex power? That is not at all clear during my read through until later chapters.
3) This might be just me, so not as strong as #1, but the MC gets mad at every little thing. "If I wasnt hiding my powers I could beat you!!!!!!!!1111!!!!" Truth is, he cant. The MC is too big for his breaches which is fine in a weak to strong type MC, but he keeps getting beat down and never learns his lesson, makes it seem like he is throwing a temper tantrum that someone who is 2 whole levels higher than him, is in fact stronger.
4) The author keeps referencing some "big event" in the past. I get it can be part of the story later and helps to define personalities and interactions of your main cast and chapter 70 in a webnovel can be just the beginning. But it comes up too often for all these vague terms in conversations to make sense. When your aunt and mom privately talk about sometime important, they would not likely talk about "the incident", they would just say what it was. 3 star general Mom has likely seen a lot of stuff, so her life probably has more than one important event, so calling 1 thing THE incident, just irks me more than is rational.
Some very good trial reads are not selected . However, the bad ones are getting selected. This one has failed the trial read.I really liked this one. It definitely could improve in some aspects , even then it was countless times better than some cliche novels.
Woahhhhhhhhh duudddddddddddddee this is really interesting. And its released frequent enough so I'm happy with that.
I actually read the chinese too, so im happy to see it getting translated
Hello guys~~
I am a new author so do help me if I made some mistakes and do comment on the chapters it will help me a lot.
Thankyou~~
book has loads of potential, just needs more chapters! glad your not repeating all the skills and such in the newer chapters! keep up the good work.
this novel is super awesome one of the best in a while
This novel remembers me the author One, who wrote One punch man and mob psyco. Is in it own way fast and awesome.
I feel it is realy intetesting even if the story is measy, or even senseless sometimes.
Author keep on, I like this novel a lot. Walter.
A great story that scratches the apocalyptic itch with a great side of romance. The MC is F/M, but there is also a strong presence of yuri with there being 2 yuri couples and 2 f/m couples. I didn't think having most of the characters we follow in a relationship would be so good, I mean after thinking about it, it made sense. They only have each other so may as well enjoy it. It definitely doesn't feel like we are following one person's story, but it's the entire cast's story. We get the great highs of battle and then we get the slow interludes which also serve as ways for them to discover themselves as well as further their relationships. It feels like I am there with the squad experiencing the terrors of the world and laughing with them whenever they have a moment of rest.
Overall give it a read, It has a bit of everything, so if you enjoy Yuri there is plenty of it and if you like F/M there is also something there for you. Love action there is plenty of arc of intense battles as well as mysteries being uncovered.