I really like this kind of writing! It’s like a beggining of those Japanese Light Novels I love so much. Maybe reverse harem???
Please avoid this, it pains my heart: "It was time for Wang Xue I mean Bai Xia..."
"him/her" decide
"*the following 659 words were exempted*" I would rather a more formal novel, but do I get there are few options
"A martial soul appeared, but somehow it was different? (People: WELL NO SH*T IT IS)" again formality, both in the sentence and the parentheses
"QI" capitals pls (qidian international)
"I'm sorry. I forgot about Grammarly-san to edit this and correct some stuff and now she's lonely. Sorry *bows down* Hmmm, do I release TSASS chapter now or later >:D" pls pls author note
Please avoid hypocrisy, it ruins a story (not that you are doing this)
good base, develop it well
if you want an editor yeah i can do some
Thank you
quality not bad
stability idek so 4
development hasnt happened
design um yeah
world so far good but 5 is perfect so yeah
don't wast your time by reading or using fb or coin's it's a waste of Time
hello, anybody know the RAW plz ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Read 12 chapter of the story, and i can say I really found something interesting.
No hi-fi vocabulary, simplified and easy to understand writing style...which is kind of weird.
As an author myself, you changed quite a lot of my view about writing...I really mean it.
Negatives-
Pacing of story, and first chapter is kinda not that catchy... compared to the chapters you wrote ahead.
Story... I won't say much about it since I only read upto ch 12.
But so far, so good.
Keep up the work
I'm just here to give a review, though I can't say much about your work as not much happened yet, though I'll say it's interesting to read and you're doing good being a firstimer :>
u need better synopsis. i wont read it yet till the synopsis get better. after that i will change the rating also. i like real world with a bit fantasy. bored of all the ancient time novel
as always in this kind of nowels everyone start good but become op and as always hard work does not mater. Person wich trained entired life lose in fight with someone which read the book and took a nap?
The shameless author here. Landing a review here because as of now, Volume 1 of this book has been completed. It shall be continued soon. Thank you for your support people.
Nice novel. .. .. .. .. .
It's a good but a pity its not free anymore i love reading it when I have a free time the characters have a unique impact in different situations also it need a more word of visualization to immerse the reader that's all angAuthor thank you
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