Becoming a god, a fine synopsis. And the progression of the story is nice, I want to see where it's going!
what? you locked the novel, that's sad mate! following this book for ages and now... sadness band sorrow ???.............mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm
Translation are coming out from mtl and Translator is not even try to put any effect on this book, fking garbage translator and I don’t even know they did they got pick by webnovel.
your story is so good. your grip on your plot is really marvellous. your every dialogue is unique or real. in short, totally different style.
Nice read ! Go try it if you like a more logical approach tu cultivation.?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
I liked the mystery in the story, and the background of the world as well..The annoying thing here is that you mixed the point of view of the first character with the point of view of the second character..that brings some confusion while reading, but I liked the rest of the aspects, By speeding up the pace of publishing, that would be great
I like it personally mc has a very dif ferent per sonality then most mcs.
I’ve really got no clue why you made the main character downright ugly. I wouldn’t care if you made him average looking, but literally none of what he does makes sense when he has such disgusting looks.
Terrible world building especially the description of a modern military organization and modern soldiers. The mc magically has access to a system that gives him perfectly loyal slaves who are subordinates with no depth and magically automatically pledge undying loyalty once bought
Good fan fic its a world hoping novel so its even better
Writing is okey there are some spelling and grammar mistakes but very rarely
Overall good novel author is not in a hurry to introduce big or OP world right at the beginning, it starts slow at least the first and the second worlds but it is starting to pick up
Good luck
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