Nothing to say other than it's a great book and that you should just keep doing what you're doing!
Hi1. The Einstein once said. The definition of insanity is doing the same thing over and over and expecting different results. The MC confessed to the very same girl more than 400 times during 4 years without getting any answer. Just from that you can see he is an idiot. That girl is the same. Maybe it is good that two idiots found one another. But from my perspective it is a tragedy.2. The story is good for 2-3 hours of reading but it becomes boring later. All the same.. I really do think that books more tham 700-800 chapters are overkill. Before writing the book you should know how to end it. Make a story and only then write. Imagine if you start to build a house but you do not know how it will looks like or how many floors/rooms it will have what will you build?? This book is exactly the same. Author just spilling words for updates. The more you read the worse it becomes.3. There is no system to measure the person power. The MC learns something becomes stronger and stronger but how strong exactly? How much one skill stonger than the other? Magic force, dream force, star force e.t.c. what are the ranking between them? I completly lost track... It all looks like a mess and who is stronger depends on author mood. If it is so why write about cultivation, levels, forces. All of them are meaningless.4. The overall feeling about the book is negative. People stuggling, dying, scheming, used by others.... There is no real trust, support, loyalty, happiness in the book (almost none). Most of it is negative. Can not continue anymore.
This story is an exciting and unpredictable adventure, with a diverse cast of characters that jump off the page. Jen, Liya, Kaganji, Kilguy, and the rest of the group are well-developed and relatable, with unique personalities and powers that add depth to the narrative. The world-building is imaginative and well-realized, with a intriguing premise that kept me guessing until the very end. Highly recommended for fans of science fiction and adventure stories.
Start from 33 chapter then you will never drop this novel.I really like character development.Writing style is good[img=recommend]. But think this novel underrated.
I like this story.
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Is there really no way for there to be more translated like this? There is a finished translation but the translation is almost impossible to read without it feel like your trying to decipher every sentence.
So this would be a littbe bit spoiler for those who haven't read it,
The concept of the story is quite interesting, instead overpowered or average mc, this mc however, lower than average... his suffering like without end just because being weak even weaker than a person without Qi. I think his honor and lust for revenge that would likely become the core of plot pushing-wheel
The story in my opinion is a bit rushing, especially first two chapters. I think in the beginning the readers should be given how the mc's life in the family that despise him like show them the kind side of the mc and how he sacrificed and protected the weak, in order to create a strong bond with the mc, so that when he eventually get banished, the readers would get the feeling of sorrow and empathy.
Then the writting, I think it's the punctuation, especially lack of coma and then the "tone color" of the dialogues to give the characters, charachters.
Overall the story is unique even tho this is the first martial art-based novel I read. With the time, you'll eventually become a great writer!
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~ Houraji Ballare
So far the story is pretty good, and I hope author don't abandon this.
Uh. If the world is a bit similar to a game you were playing, someone else probably played that game. And the creator of the game probably feels the similarity too. You would think this kind of information would be out by now.
So far i can tell this book will be a gem and i cant wait for more chapters that will appear in future. Keep up the good work Zhayne
I am writing this because there is a limit of 140 words.... Even I don't know why such limit is to be imposed but as I was saying I have reached the limit