Nobody can think like this author I highly recommend this story to many too..!!Keep up the good work..!!I am enjoying reading more than ever..!!
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Expected more from this.Great concept , but destroyed by author by his style of writing.which gave me serious headache.The word handsome and ,and first person view of MC with disastrous greatly flawed mind and mentality is fucking point of this novel.Sorry author not for me. Reading this giving me head ache.
It's perfect for those trying to find a short humorous romance. It was funny and all that. Just that, I wish I had not read the alternate ending.
I started to read this novel because the title was very interesting. After I started to read it I thought that is very good, but sadly, It doesn't get updated to often
Read this on another website, at chapter 670-something. Every human being needs something meaningful to do - read a book, work, watch a series. Without those interests in our lives, we become mere husks, shells of our former selves. Without the meaning in our lives, life becomes a bland and long thing. This novel is the embodiment of what happens when life loses its meaning.'Warlock Apprentice' is like watching paint on walls dry. You just stare, blink and look passively as the paint dries. The wall is dry? great! now lets move forward to the next wall! This continues for 670 chapters.This novel is like '120 days of sodom', just instead of horrible physical abuse, your mind is the sole beneficiary of the torture. It is slow. So, so slow. Actually, the writing isn't all that bad. It would've certainly been a pretty awesome novel if something progressed. Alas, it is just a photo taken accidentaly - nothing moves forward, with no meaning or purpose. Normally, you'd delete those photos. Shame I can't delete someone else'.
It’s really unfortunate that this story is not as well known as it should be, everything in this story so far is amazing. I would put this story in my opinion over shadow slave by a good margin, the writing quality is out of this world, and don’t even get me started on the perfekt yet simplistic powersystem, this powersystem is on par for me in balance with how hunterxhunter’s powersystem is.
By God this is an amazing novel, might just be the first book I waste my 1 useless power stone on.
It's good but needs some editing. It's a bit difficult to read but still doable. Love the story though. ☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺☺
I just finished reading what was of the 21 chapters then read destiny forged and I LOVED both of them. I NEED MORE AHH...........................................................
I have read up to 40 chapters. I can't read more cause I'm broke but anyway let me list out the things that I like: There are little to no grammatical errors. So you can pretty much read it smoothly.The world-building is great. The author set it up really well. There is no big info dumps about the world. At least for me, the author made the information about the world digestible. It didn't feel like explaining the world as if it's a textbook, explaining it for the sake of explaining but it feels like an adventure. This can be seen in the background of the MC. Instead of just simply explaining his background for one chapter or a paragraph, the author did a good job makin us curious about MC's background and showing it bit by bit instead of one big infodump. So for the people who read the first few chapters and think that the MC is stupid, bare with it as it will be explainin soon why he thought of it that way.MC: The MC is kinda developing in the first 40 chapters. You will know his morality, his priorities, his goal, and his character. If you're looking for a character that is calculative and will sacrifice anyone for his own goal, then no this is not a novel for you. The MC here is stupidly honest which is kinda refreshing. He can easily emphasize with anyone. Knows when he's fcked up and trying to adapt to this new world. He doesn't seem like a hypocrite so far.For the side characters:I'm liking the side characters so far, there might be cliches on them but the dialogs seem like something can come out from a human. I don't know how developed are they because I've only read up to chapter 40 but I'm already liking some of them. The things that I don't like:There are very slight spoilers ahead so be warned. They aren't big revelations. One of them is already in the tags lol. He has a system and it seems like he's the only one who has it. I like novels that has system if everyone has it, if it's only the MC I kinda don't like cause it undermines the future achievements of the MC. You can't help but sometimes think "If I have a system, then I'm pretty sure I can also do it." It doesn't make the MC special. It doesn't feel like he earned it. Yeah, you can say that the system didn't give it in a silver platter but you can also see how much of an advantage having a system is. Also, how can you say he's special if there's no one you can compare it to (i.e. other people having systems too). HOWEVER, that's the genre of the book so that's on me for reading it (I'm actually kinda hoping that everyone has the same system but yeah).The one that I dislike is him having a skill just by opening a book. This is just OP. I'm pretty sure we can all agree that he didn't earn it. For me, the appeal of weak to strong is the grind. And you can't remove hard work from grinding so if someone can earn a skill by just simply opening a book although it cost pain (which is just a few sentences) I'm sorry but I can't see the hard work there. I'm hoping that it's just an early boost but I would respect the author's decision and hope they have a better plan for it. But hey that's just me and if you like the MC having that skill then read it and I recommend you to read it cause it's really good this is just me not liking a small part of it. Don't let a random guy ruin what you like. TL;DRThis book is really great, Great World Building, Great Writing quality, Consistent Updates, Good story development, Great MC but a little bit of nitpick on some things that are related to the MC, would really recommend it to others.