well... I pity alice and also like her character
I really like this story but the huge problem is that the amount of spirit stones needed to unlock chapters is a ton and I don’t even get close to enough from daily stones to open them and I don’t have the money to buy them.
I just found tjis book and went to go read it and its letting me read all the chapters for free but It only gave me 5 minutes to do that so Idk if the author did this or the app or what but if the author can can u do it again please like next month or something? this book looks really good And wish to read as much as I can but u cannonly get so many free passed a day and not everyone can get coins!! so if this can happen again that would be awesome and honestly it would help bring in more people to the book especially if they read it into the later chapters!!
I love your novel so far, but the system characters are turning me away. I wa just introduced to Sarah and it seems like she has limited influence on the people with her harem system (including the mc and her harem). Are system users now just characters that are op and can influence the mc group or will they eventually be able to stop them from influencing. I really want to continue but would rather drop it now if that’s the case.
I am liking how the back story has been given. It's not in hurry and not lenthy as well. In fact very specific and perfect. Now i am just waiting for present part to come.
Yeah I'm rating for myself, if I don't do it first who will? Anyway, I appreciate anyone who reads this, even if you quit at chapter one it's still one extra read for me, still, I would appreciate you more if you read all the chapters though.As is said in the overview, I aim to have characters with their own personalities and goals, an immersive world and hopefully a good romance subplot (which will probably take me a while, I quite like slow burn).If you would ever so kindly leave your own reviews and critiques it would be very helpful, so thank you in advance.
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The story is original and kinf of interesting but the MC is too much, he is dense and always act to prove the author's ideas no matter of the consistency.So the story is resultoriented and as the author don't care about consistencies and nonesenses, the story flow is unnatural, forced, boring.English isn't my 1st language so that's why mistakes in the writing that insert contradictions is disturbing for me... I'm not stupid so i can understand what the author mean but it's repeatitive mitake so it's TIRING!!! I'm not a tranlator... why should i translate it anyway, it's not my job, FFS!
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Thai is a review for an outstanding work of the author! Good job! Having read the synopsis, it made me become automatically interested. Making me hooked by it. I can say the author was imaginative and has creative mind in his self. Making his creation to be splendid! A wonderful take on its genre! BTW, I am from review swap thread. Do check out mine too!
Nice Novel. Creative and Unique. .....................................................................................................................
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