For those who want to read this, if you hate dumb main characters that is dumber than a donkey. Don't read it
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Loved it...but it just....the plot needs to be more original ...not the main plot but the sub plots...if you konw what i mean. and also the writing quality needs to be somewhat improve.
raw link plz
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Trial Read Review (only from synopsis):
(X:ICATDOHP) - So the protagonist gets reincarnated with the power to change the dates (how old or young they are) of herbs. He is a herb disciple (good for him) and since plants are more powerful when older, he modifies the plants and consumes them making him stronger. Not going to lie, this plot seems mediocre and bland. Maybe I will check it out.
(YTIBIWBMS) - This is one of those talent stealing novels. That is literally all the synopsis covers and it doesn't really talk much about the plot. There have already been many novels similar to this one and I will only check it out if I am bored.
(ITRWISG) - Basically, the protagonist is in a modern world where he can see stats and stuff like a game while no one else can’t. This plot has been overused so much and usually comes with an extra plate of face slapping. The sad thing is that I’m already full.
(MR) - Out of all of the other trial novels this time, this seems like the one with the most plot and potential. Honestly, I can’t really understand what the plot is because the synopsis is short but it hooks you into the story (somewhat). I will check it out.
(P9Y:AAMFFY) - Protagonist transmigrates into the modern world and gets a funeral system. He also has a funeral company (you can see where this is going). Basically, he can make amazing things happen at your funeral, but that’s all. Unique plot but honestly kind of lackluster. Maybe I will read it.
(LOTP:IRAMSFTS) - Guy can get land and stuff and summon succubi and this plot is overused and seems generic blah blah blah (hey, it’s like 2:00 for me over here, don’t blame me for being sloppy). Anyway, bad. Wouldn’t recommend it.
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Very good so far. Grammatically some things could be changed but overall the story flows very nicely. Sometimes it is a bit rushed but I believe transferring worlds is really hard to do in a fluid way. Overall a great novel and much better than a lot of the higher ranking titles.
This was an interesting read.
Though the first chap was a bit of an info dump, it was still easy to read.
Writing quality is pretty good, with little to no errors.
I am not able to say much as only 1 chap out.
Still, if I have to be critical then I suggest describing the characters' appearance and the world around them like buildings etc.
Overall, good work there.
Good luck.
Karna is my idol! fellow brother! good luck with the novel , actually hindu mythology is rarely picked for a fantasy novel (I know some popular series and anime like Fate but they only use some characters) this is an uncharted path with lots of potential keep it up
The plot is very different and highly interesting
I kept my word and leave my review. Please take a look at my book.
I want to point out that I haven't read all of them because there are so many chapters
First of all, I was impressed by your writing language. You really expressed yourself very well. The structure of the world and the processing of the characters are really nice. The episodes seem a little long but never uncomfortable.
I recommend you to read it.
splendid work just hope for the other to pick it up again. I do understand though if they do not wish to. I do hope that I get to check out more of there work in the future though.
Hello author! Nice story, however, there are problems! Examples are some spelling mistakes. The updating time is not really being obeyed. However, nice story! Nice plot! Good background and then good character design????