its a good and interesting novel, its just non-virgin fmc is not something i can like and ruins it, if you can tolerate it then its fine but then again why would you read fantasy lol.
The writing quality drops drastically as the story continues. The worst part is probably the storytelling voice or the writing style shifts in a poor direction. Instead of using descriptions to tell the story, it shifts to a bad narration. The author starts telling you how you should feel rather than using their writing to allow you to arrive at the conclusion they are looking for. It’s a very lazy writing style in my opinion. The side characters become less and less relevant as the story progresses and their development nearly stops entirely. The worst part is the author continues to jam them in your face. This makes the story a boring slog of irrelevance that you continue to read only due to sunk cost, having paid for earlier chapters.
So far the story is great i really hope that you keep doing a good jodAND ITS NOT A HAREM KEEP THE GOOD WORKI WANT MORE CHAPTER don’t drop or I will dr*p y*uIf you have problem on my review BITE ME!
A gene novel with no synopsis... I think ive found the one....
It's already being translated under the name of God of Life but the translation isn't the best.
It is a great systems novel!
There is only 5 chapter so far and it is created very well. The story is enjoyable, and the introduction is done effectively. The world created seems very diverse and rich.
The author definitely has done his/her research making the world seem very much like, and RPG game, but there are other elements, which are new and not seen before making the world unique.
The writing quality and grammar are decent, some minor mistakes that can easily be solved after a reread.
The MC is described well and you already get a feel of him in the first 5 chapters. I am sure we will learn more about him as the story progresses.
Well done! I will continue reading this enjoyable story.
Haven't red it yet. Will likely write a new one later. Judt felt like the author was a good guy. And judging by the amount of chapters and the high review scores i think that he is pretty unlucky to not be popular
Its a good book.
Super boost.
This novel is basically what you would imagine the son of heaven to be.There's a lot of exaggeration you would maybe even think if it is a gimmick. This novel is very similar to History Number 1 Founder, Library Of Heaven's Path and to some extent History Strongest Senior Brother. So if you loved any of these novels mentioned you will be able to enjoy this novel.
I'm really loving it so far. The characters are fun and lovable! This whole series balances humor and seriousness pretty well so far. Excited to see what happens in ch. 5. I don't really do reviews but this series just seems to ooze natural promise and potential!
Interesting characters with equally intriguing backstories. Would love to learn more about them as time passes by! Beautifully written to convey emotions, and I see a lot of potential in this work!