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I can only give it 2.2 stars for the reason i list next.
I am 100% sure that this story is a highly gutted and edited version of "Myriad Realms Grand Manager with a God Class System" " 神级系统万界大店长 "
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I love the story is had a good plot and environment. And it's really engaging it one of the good cultivation novels on the site and I hope to see more.
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A captivating story that draws the readers in with every exhilarating act, beautifully described scene of people or landscape and unrelenting emotions that makes the readers feel what the characters are feeling. Quite unique and a strongly recommended read. Well done author.
PICK THIS BOOK UP IF YOU ARE A REINCARNATION OF THE STRONGEST SWORD GOD FAN If you are someone like me who was disappointed with rssg ending and wondered what would have happened if the book continued this book is it ! the exploration of the wider cosmos and a completely new take on vrmmo genre must read.
Writing Quality: Worst than MTL. But Ill give two stars for the sake of having an auto correct and auto paraphrase in my brain.Story Development: What is that? This fanfic doesnt have that. It just follows the plot with slight changes.Character Design: Imagine Saitama as MC but a simp. Fubuki is also what you didnt expect. she's a reincarnator so the author just wanted Fubuki for her body. Totally wasted my time reading this because of that.Updating Stability: Might as well the author drop this and start a new one. Since he barely updates this fanfic.World Background: Author expects us to have read the manga or anime so he didn't tell us about the time, place, etc.Overall: Would not suggest for you readers to read this if you expect a nice Fubuki X Saitama fluff. This is just disappointment. This is a low tier fanfic. Even worst than those harem gotta catch them all like pokemon fanfic. I tried my best persevering through reading it but I could only reach 40 chapters.
This is my honest review in my novel.The chapter 1-150 of this novel is merely the whole prologue of the story. To say the least, the real story hasn't started as of yet. Also, the first few chapters in this novel is kind of boring, since it only contains some information about novel and other stuff, but I promise that I'll try to make it better overtime. So please, bear with it for now.In the future development, our little protagonist here will be too broken that he'll even sacrifice anyone in order to save the remaining people who was important to him and achieve his goals.Many unexpected events will happen on this novel, that'll slowly break our protagonist into pieces. Many of his loved one will die, only leaving a few survivors left.The World Background of this novel is kinda mixed since I'm planning to send the main character to many worlds... You'll understand it in the future. Nonetheless, the first world is a medieval with a tint of modernity fantasy world. Even though it has phone, laptop, and stuff from the future, it doesn't have any modern buildings.Anyway, this novel is inspired by the novel TOTCF or The Trash Of The Count's Family; TBATE or The Beginning After The End, and RWTSS or Reincarnated With The Strongest System. I kind of got inspired after reading them and decided to write this novel for fun. Note, don't read this if you're expecting it to be like the novel I've mentioned above.To tell you the truth, this is merely a stepping stone for them....I wasn't really into writing, seriously. You'll understand what I meant after reading the first few chapters. Though, I guess it's too late to regret writing this novel now doesn't it?Nonetheless, I wasn't sure why but I'm enjoying writing this novel. Even if some of you guys curse at me for writing this 'thing', I'll probably just take a quick peek at your review, ignoring the negativity, and improve the mistakes you point out in the future.Also, regarding the update schedule. I didn't make one.I'll just post some chapters if I have time, or don't have anything to do.Okay, then. Before ending this review, I'll ask you guys one favor if you are planning to give a negative review.If you guys are planning to write a negative review, could you please write the reason why you disliked it? I'm only asking this to understand my flaws, and also it was so that I can learn how to keep on improving in the future.Anyway, I already wrote some of this on the synopsis so just read some of there.Peace!
The grammar is pretty bad and it’s sad that the author is from the US. I could barely get thru the 2nd chapter.
Seems like a great book, I just can’t deal with the grammar. It’s not unintelligible, but 9/10 times there’s a mistake in the sentence. Hope other people enjoy.
Wow, really interesting prologue, it got be completely hooked, hahaha ??...Anyway, the book seems really promising and am so looking forward to more chapters from the author...Can't wait to know what happens to Melina at the end of the novel ??