Really poorly translated. The speech sounds really unnatural. The characters start to wax poetic about how great the mc is to set up the mc greatness instead of the author actually writing the character do anything special. The main character goes on a stupid power trip first thing. It's just a pathetic high word count story. There s so much needless description and useless over worded junk you can skim read the story and not miss anything. I'll label it a cash grab word count trash story.Poorly translated it seriously needs an editor.Junk world building.Trash character design.World background is just more word padding.
"Tales of Kiran" presents a richly crafted fantasy world with a 100-level dungeon, each 10 levels featuring unique environments. The innovative magical systems, diverse settings, and engaging system mechanics create an immersive experience. Adding more geopolitical details and character backstories could enhance depth.
I really like how a baddass woman is mavys. You go girl! I really really like the fighting scene, the author narrated it very well. I am looking forward to the another upcoming scenes of the three: mavys, her brother and her uncle?Overall the story is nice????????? good job authornim:)
Writing Quality is little good. But, many parts of story doesn't make any sense. Power revealing parts are all over the place.When he was level 2( with stats at level 6) he kills a beast and says it was a level ten beast. In one chapter he was like level 10 and later chapters he becomes level 25. There were no plots in between.I don't say it was bad, but it was not particularly good either.
If you're the type that likes reading VR-related stories then try tis novel out, if not you are missing out on something. Your world build is great, and so are the characters, there are some grammar errors in the novel, but they are only small and can happen to anyone. Overall, this is a 4.5/5, I would recommend this novel to anyone who likes Video Games Novels :)
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Hahhahaa that synopsis seems fun! I'm adding it to my library and letting it accumulate more chapters before binge reading hehe. Keep it up author. I like your Arifureta Fanfic so I expect to like this as well. Welp cya and good luck~
Honestly, this is a great book, to begin with, I don't think I can imagine the pain Arylan is facing with memory loss and the only family you have not telling you about the past.Author, you're great at writing, this is a beautiful book and I want you to keep it going. Cheers
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I like this novel very much, hope author don't drop it. writing quality is also good. hope author continue this work. also I have a request that, can author write novels that like Lookism, question supremacy type novel.
What's the difference between Parazyte and OP parazyte???
Great job. Your story is going on interesting. Please update daily. Good luck.Need more chapters. Overall awesome thought process. All the best.