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Since there is only one chapter, this review could mean nothing and should be taken with a grain of salt as I too, am just an a m a t e u r writer.First off, I don't understand who is narrating and what person (2/nd and 3/rd) the story is being told in. The starting paragraph doesn't really captivate the reader too much, and it shows a lack of effort put into it. (What I'm saying is — it sounds like the story is beginning with someone just telling the story at a dinner table or something. Grammar is alright and nothing that's unreadable or anything, so that's nice. I however, can't get a picture in my head of what I'm witnessing here. There are no descriptions of anyone basically, and no real location I can imagine. Yes, he was in a bar, but where is he now? The street? The bar? The bathroom? I don't know. This is a comedy, as clearly labeled by the author. And there is a lot of cussing. So if you like curse words and immaturity this might be a very well read for you. (Not my cup of tea personally) I'm also not very used to seeing names followed by a ":" and then they talk. It makes the dialogue bland and lacks emphasis. The story has potential if it's consistent and appeals to a certain audience other than myself. Once again, I personally don't read Harem/Comedy/System, so this review can mean nothing to you. It's just some of my thoughts with an unbiased rating. Keep writing and improving! Cuz that's what writing is about!
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A great story for fans of sci-fi. Author delivered substantial details to show a developed advanced setting with diverse characters. World-building is exceptional, with subtle hints, and exquisite detail. The story is entertaining and I look forward to future updates! I'm surprised there are not more reviews!!
This novel is about Borrowing System, and this one is unique! The writing is easy to read, easy to understand and has an interesting plot that I came to like. The characters are likable and the flow of the narrative is awesome! The story development is in right pacing, not so fast and not so slow either. Overall, the story is entertaining, a page turner and makes me laugh. Above all a good read! Good job, Author! Keep it up!
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"A relationship is not created overnight, it takes time, an example of this would be a man and a woman meet, at first they are only known, but the two spent several years together traveling, in the middle of the way the two fall in love ". These what the MC said to the girl he saved during the test, damn he makes fun of the world he ****ed xiao xi in chapter 10 while he not even some day, he saved her, and the **** the same day and he has the face to say something like sa? I'm speechless hat low author
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Can we like have a normal talented beast tamer unlike this system based crap. We as readers are also beaming systematic will all this system novels creativity is out of the window