Brain dead MC with an indestructible plot armor.
People says don't go more than 3 meters deep (because its very dangerous) but he does anyway.
Butts in to other peoples business for no reason and the only thing he gains is enemy.
Has an opportunity to learn skills ; he chooses the books based on their names. Not even opening the book to check out the descriptions or anything.
Not to mention author making mc's soul beast look like a joke so that others can mock him.
OH and mc never questions about the world he lives in, techniques that he's using.(If you don't know, ask your teacher... smh)
Don't bother reading this.....100ch+
For some reason, after reading the title and the synopsis, the first thing that pops into my head is The Legendary Mechanic. Anyone else thought about Han Xiao?
I live cultivation novels read a ton. This one started out good too. But after 650 or so chapters I gave up on it.
Unlike most cultivation novels as the story goes on the MC just keeps getting weaker and weaker and more stupid. First he cannot move up anymore. Then he cripples his soul. Then he cripples his physical body. Then he cannot use his summons. Then he cannot use his cultivation till understands chaos. Then when understands chaos he destroys every other power he had and all his meridians, so he cannot even use the chaos power he has. By that point I just gave up just stupidity by that point.
i need to vote again this time. i think this story is good because of too many voters.. this story will be my next target.. good luck air.. thanks
HI LOVELY AUTHORRR! Firstly, I can't help but mention it's easier on the readers eyes if the paragraphs are smaller. Secondly, the different dialects of the characters have been maintained wonderfully oof! Lasty, it was never a cup of my tea, (this genre) however i find myself intrigued to stay on track with this amazingly scripted piece. The time i have in my hands doesnt do justice as i reallly wanna read more hehe. WELL DONE
Coolio
The fragment holder is an interesting idea.
Hope their would system update in order to expand to other games.
Get more skills to support him real life.
Also it would interesting adding supernatural to world but that's just my opinion.
It has shortcomings but idea is unique, and i believe author has the competence to write a good story. Webnovel needs a good sci fi story and this is the one.
I gotta say, the story is interesting, I want to see the progressive not gonna lie, though there are some negative points and I'm not going to say it. Can't wait to see more.
haven't read your translation yet, but I'm pretty sure it's better than the garbage webnovel pulled for this book. I wish you good luck!....
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.