this is almost unreadable at times. the only reason I'm still willing to read this is because of the characters. this needs a lot of grammar and character association (i.e he, her)corrections to change this from engrisch to english. besides that nothing is amazing about this book. it's just a good read.
Love this story. Definitely recommend everyone to give it a try reading it
i am shocked because this is surprisingly good............................................................................................................
Thanks for reading!
I never intended to post Regency stories here when I started, but then there was a historical romance contest, so I posted the first one. And then... Just when I was requested to continue the story, up popped a contest for commoner consort! >:0
And so here we are, and I'm posting two chapters a day, but this means the story will likely be completed shortly after the contest ends.
The Marques Waverly was introduced in Kateri Leona, and I have been waffling back and forth over whether to maintain the original three light novels format or combine this one with the next one, in which the Marques moves from romantic interest to main character in his own right.
Regarding the spelling of Marques, I chose it as the middle ground between Marquis and Marquess, and all three are pronounced Marky, making him Marky Mark :p (Ok, bad joke, I know.)
I like the story so far, and I think that It has a great potential. I also like the points of view that we have, we get to know the world around the main character a lot more.
Looking forward to more chapters.
Best wishes for more chapters and a great novel that we all can enjoy.
I don't know why the author decided to write a bloodline system novel when he obviously does not care about the bloodlines or abilities. While the novel in itself is good, the author constantly leaves out the descriptions of new skills and bloodlines and leaves us trying to pick up the pieces in our heads . Like he will kill some people and get their bloodline but he won't mention what they are for like 20 chapters.
When he kills like 20 criminals and then sits down to combine them the author shows like one combination and then just throws in a line like "Then I combined 4 other abilities" and then like never mentions it again. If your gonna write a system novel, you should put effort into showing us what bloodlines he collects and creates. You would think that would be a big part of something literally named the bloodline system. But I guess no, the author just jumps over crucial details for no real reason. Also when he combines abilities the system tells him how compatible they are, but no matter what it says the mc always combines it anyway.
Also For the first 200 chapters the mc like doesn't take other peoples bloodlines unless they attack him, like why can't he go out and hunt criminals or something. he can get unlimited bloodlines but he only takes like 4. WHY????
Don't get me started on the random abilities the system gives him like dash for no other reason than being a system novel. Would be a lot cooler if the mc got his abilities more from bloodlines then random system powerups. Again the author should just put more of a focus on the bloodlines. Why write a story focused on them then just gonna ignore them. Leaves me confused and disappointed.
This great I love it it’s not your typical fake kingdom building story. The grammar is better than most and I can’t wait to read more
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nice story, liked the world building, i do not normally write a review but i think this book needs more attention, so here I am :Dkeep the good work up and hopefully your book will find the hands to more people
2nd Review cause why not.
This won't be as in-depth as the previous one. I only want to touch on one thing that I felt needed to be said.
Author you set-up a nice story with an evil protagonist. Now follow through with it, show us his actions and how it affects others around him. Show us how his enemies and possible allies feel about him. Show us this world and how the protagonist navigates throughout the setting. And finally keep your promise and...
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