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I don't know why I even kept reading after I noticed the Harem tag, but damn, harem novels gets ruined so fast its kinda funny. It seemed like a good story and nice worldbuilding, but harem is just the bane of good writing.
That's so amazing to be honest, at first I tought it would just be a random harem book, but it was not just another one of these. The story is interesting, and it got some laughs from me, hope the author doesn't drop...
Amazing novel i hope more chapters are made soon. i recomend that peaople who lole isekai novels to read this and if you like vampires you should read the other books thIs author pancakeWitch makes
Love the story so far! Very exiting world building and character development!
Just Love It...?❤?From the beginning, it will hook you up. Every chapter is well-written and all the descriptions are so detailed and beautiful.?❤?Need more chapters!❤?keep uploading
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good start, the story in brief is a copy of the boku base in the hero (what is not a problem) with elements of wuxia? xianxia in the 'current' world, with system.the world configuration: the world is 30 years advanced, but instead of society and the world evolve, they regress. the general morality degrades and returns to the point where the weak is ruled by the fort, why? because yes, it does not have a good esplicaçao, the author says that it has powers can do the work of ten, but the works that only require of a person? besides that because ALL abilities are useful for ALL departments? alias people who are impotent (have little chance of awakening their power, or based on what the system said have conditions difficult to complete) are discriminated and has no value, because? because EVERY worker has to have a power, why? because ALL powers are useful or are used to cultivate, and of course no one would care about the rare powerless ... what can they contribute with simple jobs or with science ?? 2000 years of history and scientific advances, medical, spatial, political and social struggles, do not count ?? Hahaha (laughs) Of course not, are you an idiot? Why would they differ?the story: the protagonist lake is a genius and has little chance of losing his power (impotent), so all his "friends" abandon him and he learns to live in solitude ignoring the speeches of others (ok, good incincio dark the way that I like) and continues to train with the resources (what resources and what they serve? not explained) that her mother works hard to achieve, and to reciprocate her for the sacrifices she makes for him, he goes to a low level school (even though he could go for a much better one) to escape from his former classmates, even though they apparently ignored him or spoke ill of him (what should he have learned to ignore ...?), in the low-level school he meets Gregory Chor the son of a great family that controls incredible and exact 15% and his gang that beat him and mock him for being imposing and he, with his incredible intelligence, comes to the conclusion that to revoke would bring consequences for himself and his mother and that the school could come to weaves it (because he cares enough to offend a child of a large family, why? because yes), but of course he does not let that up, and he makes an ironic comment in front of Gregory and the gang, who immediately beat him to break his bone and leave him unconscious, and then gregory has a great idea !! he knew a hole in the city wall (very safe city), how about taking him from school to the forest and leaving him 10-20 minutes from the city for him to be killed by the beasts? Hmm? Someone to stop me, to keep someone unconscious in the city? the protagonist wake up ?? Beasts attack us ??? blame for killing someone ???? Of course I'm not from a big family, so? success, we killed him. so the system appears at the right time to kill the beast who was about to kill lake and heal it and any injury, he wakes up and is surprised by the situation and returns to the city and denounces gregory by the obvious attempt of murder? or warn you about the hole in the wall? of course not, he is the son of a large family that controls 15% of the city and that there are no enemies to support the protagonist and decrease the influence of the family, and of course that he goes to school and with his intelligence, perception and senses (he is also in the school of low level?) and nothing happens there, he returns home and discovers the system that tells him to unlock his ability he has to reach the copper esper 5 , as a reward for having completed the tutorial the system of a very rare method of cultivation of high level that all the great families would kill to have, however that is very difficult to learn and to use and the initial part could take 1 year, it spends 30 minutes to start spinning the technique, it has to be said that a medium sper would take several days to begin to understand and begin to actually cultivate, and in 8 hours of cultivation it breaks the fireplace in which it was trapped for a while and increases So much your stats,I stopped reading here, the next chapter is called spar and I think gregory will come to give problems and lake ira beat him disregarding the safety of his mother and the princess (which he bumped) will help him with his problems and he will help her find out her problem (for her to be in a low-level school there must be a problem) and conserve that same problem maybe even sharing her method of cultivation and she will prove to be an incredible cultivator and be taken away from return to his family to farm or house it with another large family and so on.finally the story is predictable with elements xianxia too and with the protagonist growing fast of more and great families idiots and too influential etc.
Part of a review swap, and at time of reading, there are 14 chapters.To be brutally honest, this genre is not my cup of tea. The word "suicide" itself turns me off, as I don't like anything remotely dark. Violence, is fine strangely enough.Anyway! On with the review.Writing Quality: English isn't my first language, so any minor grammatical erros wouldn't be seen by me. However, I would suggest Author to :(i) Ensure proper capitalisation of words(ii) Have more paragraphs, especially when it's a dialogue. Would make the reading smoother. When a paragraph is too big, those who read using an app would find the huge chunk of text off-puttingStability of Updates: 5* in good faithStory Development: It's certainly a good start and is developing well. You can see how the death of the sister was the catalyst to him turning out / becoming better. It's a unique perspective for me (can't say if this is new, or fresh as I don't normally read this genre). Character Design/World Background: So far, so good. The pace is there, the development is well.All the best Author. :)
I’ll say it is a pretty good R 18 novel, and although in the tags there was netori given but until the chapter 6(latest chapter) which I have read there no netori so I’ll say it not pure netori. So people who avoid netori can also give this novel a try. Although this novel is still in it’s early stage it’s pretty good(because I don’t know how the future novel will be, so I can’t say awesome or anything). I have felling that it can achieve good success in future and I hope that I wouldn’t be proven wrong.
To be very honest, I just wanted to read the synopsis and one chapter but I’ve been reading since yesterday. The suspense and urge to read more is crazy, Thank you Author for this great book!!