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Gives me chinese urban cultuvation vibes. It’s a good mix up though giving it the western culture side.
The ultimate problem with this story is that the system is too all-encompassing and intrusive. There are many moments where something urgent is happening RIGHT NOW in front of the MCs face, but then there will be paragraphs of digression because of the system. The feeling that the MC is just standing and staring slack-jawed off into space (interacting with his system) while important plot events happen around him appears just a few too many times for my taste.Moreover, the system really just has too many features (just like a real pay-to-win shop). There's a section for MCs cultivation, techniques, and body tempering, there's a section for mounts, for battle pets, for random daily events like parkour, for a "trial tower" he can climb for rewards, for an instance space where he can fight "bosses" he's met in the real world(daily), for a gold farming space, for his personal equipment which he collects by killing monsters and getting "drops
there is a whole bunch of gender changes throught the book. also the names of places and people change as well. no consistency at all.
so far at 51 chapters this story is rather good, the characters interact with each other that same way one would expect long time freinds to and the mc is refreshingly human in his mistakes while not doing anything that would seem illogical, try out the first 40 free chapters first but I believe as long as the author continues this it will turn into a great story
There are currently just 17 chapters, but it has a quite fast pace and no fillers so far. The plot is not about the MC is cheating in sports like another bad review said, but about cheating when it comes to coaching others. Which means they can train faster and better. A good point is also that the MC can’t make people be faster than Usain Bolt if they are fatties, which makes the story a bit more realistic. Pretty good stuff and refreshing without arrogant people killing each other. Hope the story develops well and the other won’t put so many filler chapters like at some other LNs.
[img=coins] This was a great book and I hope the author makes more like it. The main character was interesting enough to keep my interest throughout the whole story. The fictional celebrity similarity to some of my favorite Korean celebs was hilariously spot on.
I am usually a silent reader and I don't really post a comment but yayy this is amazing.
Its a pretty average story loaded with tons of references to other authors work. The author does say this him/her self in the comments of nearly each chapter. Which I can only give him/her Big praise for.
The biggest Problem i have with it is that these tropes and refernces are just stacked behind each other without much strings between. It read like Multiple storys after each other without fleshing out of any Charakter. Maybe sometime I'll force my self to understand the plot but as of now I am dropping the story At the 30iest chapter Mark.
Yours sincrrely,
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Hi all. Writer here. Shamelessly out rating 5 for my work. Any feedback are welcome as this is my first time writing and english is not my first language. Expected there will be a lot of grammar error.