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Nice introduction. Keep it up
I don't know what to say.
this story is superb??
PLEASE DISREGARD CHAPTER 31: A CALL FOR HELP. This is actually chaptet 32. It hasn't been edited and wasn't meant to be uploaded and has now been released between chapters 30 and 31. I've emailed my editor to fix this but in the meantime don't waste coins on my mistake.
if Lorrain still sleeps with him than i will stop reading this book. because i dont want to be sick mentally
wow nice story ...️...
how it is with updates?
Love the book who love the audio to be updated as well
Super-powered cheat parenting, but not very smart, paired with a dull orphan tasked with saving a kid who has a sad background story but nothing else particularly noteworthy.
A good read when you have nothing better to do, though don't expect much from this one.
Fran comes across as a one-dimensional cliché character: naive to the point of being borderline idiotic (though somewhat reasonable given her age), ignorant, cool and edgy, a glutton, and a battle maniac. Cute? Only according to the talking sword (or the author), who repeatedly call her cute, likely hoping readers will think so too and grow attached to her over time.
I'm up to chapter 321 so far, and there's been no character development for either of them, aside from becoming stronger. If anything, it feels more like character decline. It cringes me when she blabbers every secret she has (including the sword's) to some random princess she just met because she wants to be friends.
The more into the story, the more powerful and stupid they become. The MC (the talking sword), who is supposed to be the adult and responsible for stopping her from making foolish decisions, instead goes along with her stupidity, saying, "Ah, I can't stop her, so I'll support her recklessness." What?
At least they haven't done the hundred-chapter training arc yet, so there's some adventure to keep it bearable. However, it's becoming a bit too predictable:
They go somewhere → something shady happens as a sign of future trouble → the trouble actually occurs → they aren't capable enough to handle it → Fran insists on solving it while the sword tries to stop her but eventually agrees to her reckless decision → some help or miracle occurs → trouble is solved, everyone is happy → insert slice-of-life content where she eats tons of food and whatnot → they say goodbye → she goes somewhere else → repeat.
Edit: Chapter 655 here, and gosh, they are on a secret-spreading spree, *facepalm*
"Hey there, stranger. I'm Fran, and this is Master, an Intelligent sword. My parents died, and I was a slave. I'm on a journey to become strong so I can kill S-Class Fiends to save my kind from a curse that prevents their evolution. By the way, there are Divine Beasts, Ex-Divine Swords, and a sealed God inside Master. Nice to meet you..."
Some people seeing this @ 98 won’t ever know this was rank 11 once upon a time lol story fell off last 200 or so chaps
Are their any similar novel like technology system ?
Arc 1 was great so I read the mtl, it goes down the gutter the more the story progresses
