Love the story, A few grammar errors here and there, but not bad. It is a great new take for a cultivation novel. Not the same old story redone with new characters. Good job, can't wait to read more.
This book is really great!I love the storyline and how the author portrayed the characters. You guys should give this author a chance. It's 5 stars from me. ★★★★★Can't wait to see what will happen next. Keep up the good job, author.
This is a well-written novel with an engaging plot line. The FL is ruthless in her action, decisive when she needs to be, can delegate and influence people to follow her with her actions. Given her background, this is the only way she could survive so long.Yet, she is innocent and somewhat fragile when is comes to accepting affection and trusting people around her. The author has done a wonderful job in portraying such a complex and beautiful character. And her story is just getting started. I can’t wait to read what happens next! P.S. a big shoutout to the most handsome and amazing book brother Nan Luo! ♥️P.P.S. The next chapter is out! I’m off to read… ✨
Hello, I love reading through your story, i enjoy the energy you gathered together but it has low engagers I would like to discuss something with you that will help the engagement of your book
It's a decent system book, and I like the ML. However, sometimes the writing style can be a little off, but for the most part it's good.I'm curious to see where this goes.
I've read through this twice now, extremely excited for more and the only complaint i have is that there's not more of it.This story has just so much potential and life to it and the premise is just so incredibly captivating, i really just wish there were thousands of chapters to read instead of hundreds.
I really liked the story and the characters it's a bit too long for my taste but it's good nonetheless. good work mate, also the cover is outstanding.
From the synopsys itself this novel hooks you up. Such a unique and a weird universe in this novel is set. I can vividly see everything happening in the chapters because of the author’s amazing ability to describe the world.The Main Character has a tinge of mystery and absolutely deserves more attention. Im looking forward to read more chapters.
The story is very detailed and will give the readers a vivid imagination of the situation and characters. This story is also good in terms of explaining the origin of the said virus. It is also uniquely done and I love the way it was placed in the Philippines. Good job author. I hope you write more stories in the future and remained the talent of writing in your hands.
This story is very nice with a strong storyline, nothing is out of place and the characters are unique. I would highly suggest this :3 well i hope everyone reads it
Just had to say that I really love the interactions between the sword and the new welder hahaha. It’s pretty funny. I also like the concept and the plot in general. It has rich lore and good storytelling. The grammar was pretty good too. Check it out ?
A great war that swept all the world leaving none from its prying jaws of death... A soldier turned coward who ran away from those horrors for he has seen his loved ones, friends, war mates, his dearest all lost to the cruel war that none experienced and never expected... By a fluke he returned to past which he vowed to protect all those smiles and happiness., this is a story of war hero who's in quest to stop the great war from happening. This is a story that tells us about morality, virtue, cruelty, happiness, sad, a mixture of war and endless court machinations going across the kingdoms courts... A story of betrayal a story of hope a story of enlightenment..... Sigh...... I think I wrote a little tooo much....