kyleqi
Nah I’ll tell you right now don’ even bother to start you can’t even access the first 25 chapters because the author decided to sell it separately on Amazon
Hey can some one tell me how to vote with a power stone because I don’t really know how to
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A nice impression from the beginning of the story. The author pays attention to the details of the world. We all have long understood and are not very interested in the detail of another System. The author has taken to describing the Galaxy. The Colony is hardly described yet. But here the capital of the intelligent cats amused me with amusing details. Tasty, funny. interesting. And the adventures of the hero are different. The author don't be boring. Good luck with your writing.
Man this is some good stuff. The feels in the writing is spectacular, it will definitely pull you in.
The storyline, the plot and characters all well written.
Keep it up man.
Interesting idea and all but the writing quality is so poor it's absolutely unreadable. It's a shame really.
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Such an amazing start! I love the author's other novel too, but I think I may grow to like this one even more!!! I hope this one can be updated soon! But for now I'll patiently wait until this gem is polished and released to the world for us to admire and praise! Thank you for an amazing story, love your eternal fan!
Author is very helpful in answering questions/comments troughout the story but this review is about the book not the author.
Warning- some spoilers
Im at chapter 50- sometimes the mc care about people(he kills his own faction guy for raping women) then 2 chapters later he force 20 people to suicide. One second he make a deal with the most cruel god to sacrifice one hundred souls then the next he want to save 4 prisoners.. This MC sooo wishy washy mentality its a joke
Second he is constantly abandoned and hunted by everyone and everywhere he goes, in the first 30 chaps women spit on him, push his head into ground and whip him and then men pee on him...After he survive that he meet a women who told him she was watching everything and made a deal with her to help her lmao without even knowing anything about her nor the world he is in.. he trust to easy..
not to mention im at chapter 50 yet he doesnt even know how to use basic mana/how to fight /how to use his powers/how to use his system.
Also EVERYONE he meets call him newbie because he is stupid and doesnt know anything yet he does 0 eFfort to learn anything.
Sigh my conclusion great story but worst worst wordt most stupid frustrating mc possible
honest to God this will degrade your brain cells until there is no brain anymore if you're going to ask why just read to chapter 7 and you would get it I definitely can't keep reading for the ones who giving fake reviews shame on you
Where is new chapter?????????????????????????
