Pretty good, definitely recommend got a good story so far and like how the Mc knowns his end goal. And I know for a fact the thing that gonna be attractive about this is the Aventures
to start this off properly I have to preface this with I haven't read this book yet I just wanted to say something to the author.
you said roughly that the mc will start off weak and not to expect him to power level, i'm fine with that as long as his abilities are either interesting and or well explored.
a example of this is the dao of magic it takes a already interesting and IMO ability/power cultivation and explores it rather thoroughly.
the reason this is relavent is because "to me at least" this is one of the major draws to a op fan fiction almost instant access to cool abilities/powers to explore.
this acts as a really good hook to get people to stay and continue reading especially on fan fic sites,
because you most probably won't find people who care about the story or character development as long as the mc doesn't make them want to throw up in repulsion.
ps sorry if this comes out as a big block of text I wrote this on my phone I tried to make it not one but I can only hope it worked.
This book as had me hooked since I started reading it. The perfect blend of character development action and backstory. An amazing read from start to finish. I think this novel will be officially published and promptly turned in to a movie in the future.
This is my favorite story to read at the moment so good in fact that it is the first one to make me pay for chapters cause I want to read it so much.
awasome another grreat story dont stop never give up ......................................
Great VR MMORPG novel to read... the story goes on flow, but the characters are few... it has a suspenseful backstory to wait for the upcoming chapters...
I recommend this story for people who typically like god like mc . Mc got reincarnated in another world with an cheat like system and made his top without any difficulty .
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I really want it to update quickly can't wait for more and the story looks promising i will be expecting more from this i hope this doesnot stress our writer.
Total score - 4.6
The story premise and the hook are very nice, I have a feeling that it will be a very good story just with what is written so far. There are small problems with the writing such as words not being placed appropriately. But overall it is very good.
I would like to start by saying the story is great and what I mean by giving it such a low score on writing quality is not to criticize the author but rather the translator because this iS machine-translation quality with minimal editing, which is unfortunate as I would love to read more; however with such low quality translations, it is headache inducing to read.
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