Was an incredible Novel for me for the first few hundred chapters (one I’d rate pretty high) but around mid 300’s when the MC makes it to a higher realm the story becomes a blatant rip off of “Most Generous Master” they always had similar concepts before, but this one was different in multiple ways which gave it originality.A good read up until he goes to a higher realm, after that though it’s quality takes a big drop, things he did prior to ascending seemingly being for nothing / forgot, and as mention it being a blatant copy with very few changes
What a story! If I feel this in the begining what about continuation, I wish you update this chapters after every hour, I can't get tired reading this. This goes to you author, I expect much, a sweet simple story.?
SUPERB. MUST READIt's story is really cool and there are so many elements and surprises in every corner that it makes one not wanting to stop after starting it. Such great imagination makes me feel like I am in the book.
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Author here!
Just gonna write a shameless review real quick...
5 Stars!
Why?
Because i'm shameless...
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Oh, and one more thing.
This novel might or might not get premium later on.
I'm thinking of starting a contract with webnovel, but I also want you guys to be able to read my novel freely.
We all have very hard lives, and this novel was created to give you some time to get that weight off your shoulders and make you happy.
That's why I made this comedy novel anyways!
To brighten someone's day.
Thank you for the novel. The story is good and I like the the army of undead. I think it can be the potential for this novel. I like it. Just keep updating...
This is the “Transmigrated to become NPC sand take advantage of players genre”
For similar works-
The Legendary Mechanic (Sci-fi World)
I am a Legendary Boss (Western Fantasy World)
And lastly this novel (Xianxia World)
Yay. I feel like this genre gets views off of how so many people can relate to being a gamer and getting scammed (or at least it feels like) by NPCs. There’s a similar genre for getting scammed by game creator.
The further the story progresses the dumber the MC gets as he makes elementary mistakes such as creating enemies and instead of focusing on getting stronger he is busy chasing after women. Furthermore is MC always after new women but the ones, who are already in harem are completely left out oft he story.
This is the second time I reviewed this story. It's a good story, and I like the way it's progressing. When it first started, I wasn't sure what he would do to make it work, but now I feel like he found something that can carry this story for many chapters. Don't want to spoil it too much, but worth a read.
All i have to say is... Perfectly dark.
Because it said review too short
I love this!!!
This is fun and cool!!
Read this!!
Highly recomended!!
The pace is slow, gloomy, and interesting! I liked it!
Fantasy, Reincarnation, and Game!!
I'm confused about what this is supposed to be.spoiler alert..Why have our mc who is more than a billion years old. He got reincarnated with a system that makes him do wines. In the first chapters, I felt that the story was going fast and I started to get into it but then when it came to the origin of frost wine it started to become weird.The author started to locked possible ways to the mc become stronger, not only that but his explanation are odd and made it look stupid how he could cultivate to the 9th Saint rank in the first place. The sense of the progression of the story felt odd because of the origin of frost wine, we were already introduced to a more expensive wine but then the system makes the mc work to get this cheaper one.Furthermore in the story, the store is basically ignored by the mc, the system even gives him a mission that does not contribute anything to the store but to him. His decisions are strange he doesn't want to interfere in the kingdom, but then he wants, but in chapters later he doesn't want, and then he fights a dragon and he rediscovers a hidden side of him, after that he decided that he was going to interfere. IT goes back and front.Then he wants to create a sect, this is the chapter that I'm currently and i wonder to myself, Why the fu** is this called "The immortal's Wine Store" since chapter 10-13 nothing expensive appear in the board of the store. It's like the author had an idea he didn't like where it was going and kept changing and changing it.
Currently just caught up to the latest chapter, and what I can say about it, is that it holds a certain intrigue and a special pazazz to want u to keep on reading and find out where is the story headed, is the MC changinging in anyway. Though u dont notice some character development there is plently though its small and it progresses over time. I highly recommend this book. And author keep up the good work and have a blessed day, thank u for writing such an interesting book.It feels like a was rambling.