Unsamani
This is a slice-of-life series focused on the MC being treated as a genius because he was a history buff or else lived through that time period before. The chapters only consist of flattery and shock regarding his comments, even though they aren't world-bending concepts and would've been possible to figure out enough without him.
The MC is a mystery. Considering he's not personally familiar with anyone there, it looks like he traveled through time to the past or something. Since the series mentioned transmigration, I thought he went to a world in a book that described history of this other world, but one of the readers commented that "transmigration" is a mistranslation here. If he had memories of his future sent to the past, then he'd have more relationships with people. If this world is in a book, then he'd have his own agenda. Therefore, it looks like he's a history buff that just traveled back in time. There's no mention of a family, so I guess he wasn't reincarnated but just appeared out of nowhere.
Although the MC cooks excellent food, the food is never described in detail. In fact, the setting of the world and description of the appearances of various things is never given at all. I initially thought it was set to a place like Europe in the middle ages since western names were used and the king was implied to only have one wife. Later, the king has a harem filled with many wives and concubines rather than mistresses.
Aside from the setting and world background having no information, the characters themselves have no details either. A couple of people are described as old while the MC is described as young. There is no information about their races or how they dress. There isn't even any culture described at all.
This series is incredibly passive. The system would have been its saving grace since it could've added a plot, but it still hasn't appeared forty chapters in.
There is no plot, and there isn't any story development.
No female characters appear in the first forty chapters with the exception of one of the king's wives and her maids. She appears once.
With no story development, no plot, no character design, and no world background, there's nothing to expect from this series. Once you read the first chapter, you've basically read them all. They all flow in similar ways. I can't imagine what the author was thinking while writing this.
I really don't like novels were the MC breaks the entire world's system in the first chapters. Why even spent time establishing a world, not that copying pokemon is great, but still, why spent the time only to shatter everything to make the MC look OP?
There are no twists, no suspense and no immersion. This is literally a stomp festival in written form.
Might be fun as a fanfiction for pokemon, but as a stand alone work? Just terrible.
Anyone know the RAW name? im enjoying this a lot and i hope this gets picked
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This novel is one of the most well written novel I've came across in recent time,the world building even though small is wonderful and it'll surely expand in upcoming chapters,the mc is good even though a little Cruel and understandably so but he is still likeable, the cultivation system is also unique and well thought out and the whole asura conqueror theme gives it an exciting turn,but I wanted to ask that it's an original series or a translation.
Good day Author! im done reading your masterpiece and i must say that this story deserves so much recognition as it has a good plot, character, events, and content. I am not fond of this kind of story but after i read yours i got curios and wanted to have more. I will add this on my collection so i can see how interesting this story will get. Continue on writing!
So far this novel is pretty promising. I've read several world building novels like this and the hardest thing for most people is pacing themselves. More often than not they will try to speed things up to get to the "good parts", so I can't help but feel reshreshed to see the author taking their time here... I look forward to seeing how you grow your world.
annoying, I've read up to chapter 20. I was fooled by the rating.
This story easily stands out as the best one I've read on this website so far. It strikes the perfect balance with the character development, story progression, etc. And the fights are also extremely well-written, with just the right amount of comedy. Some of the fight scenes have me on the edge of my seat! Truly incredible work, keep it up!
