I like this novel and would like more chapters. Or if someone has the raw please tell me in the comments.140 characters 140 characters 140
Really good and creative. I love the writing style and language used in ch 1. Although the world building could use some work as I feel it’s more telling rather than showing (a good balance between the two still needs to be established), the story is fun and full of adventure
This novel is for my fellow men of culture, who like to read cultured novels with a plot and dope action + OP MC+ Harem+ Superpowers+ Lemons+ Romance+ good writing quality.
I won't claim anything else. Read it and judge it yourself!
This novel is stupid. Everything seems more Asian than American even though it's based in America. Lots of inconsistencies. The ending was too abrupt. it just ended with "He got a First class merit but no one knew because it was confidential." ??? what kind of ending was that? they just rounded up an entire arc in TWO paragraphs and said "ya we done with this story".???? Problems with this story are listed here.
1) Asian culture in an American setting. eg. Calling people aunts and uncles and also calling others brother or sister (Americans just call people-besides parents and grandparents- by their names regardless of age) Also, terms like Qi etc were used often.
2) Repetition
3) There's no flow. No connection between different arcs.
4) the balance of gaining points or rewards is tilted. MC did nothing besides reading and all reading materials was provided on a silver platter (including confidential info)
5) Everyone just trusted him without hesitation for no actual reason. He just said "Believe me." and they'd just do.
5) The anti gravity arc was simply just cut out. the majority of the book was of him "reaching for the stars". Instead of working on it after making a whole research laboratory, he just did some side quests and the book ended.
6) What about Atlantis??? there was a whole civilization dying there and you just left for the side quests. Was making a submarine so important? Just to showoff to the Russians?
7) MC has no remorse. He just bombed a whole area in Mexico.
8) Lots of white supremacy and unfounded nationalism. After all that happened IRL to America, (BLM, police aggression, etc) this whole book just triggered me.
9) Terrible writing and grammar. Why so many exclamation marks?
10) I don't even know what the MC looks like. I read the entire book and no mention of his eye or hair colour.
11) Time periods was unrealistic. it takes time to draft up something whether digitally or by hand (at least a week or more) yet he just finished building a whole new working submarine in 2 weeks and also got it tested and all. (bro. who is the one designing and labelling the stuff? -_-)
12) He just forgets people he made promises to. What happened to that guy who found his talent? His friends? Mavis or whatever her name was? what about the researchers in the labs? Those professors he poached?
I'm done writing .
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This story is hilarious, Though i do have to complain that the mc lets the system do everything and gets praised for it but excluding that i had a great time reading it
The Author came up with an intriguing concept that will instantly catch the attention of the readers. The writing style made it even more precise. Good job, Author!
don't have any words to say just wanted to gave it five star . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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literal simp bible right here
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please if you are not intentionally plagiarising this work, attribute the original work in the synopsis, the real name of this novel is Invincible Conquerer. Thanks
If you're looking for a system that is different from the new norms since a certain Vampire System, this is definitely a great novel so far, the author says to give it 10 chapters, but I was hooked right away. I was looking for something with the merchant vibe and this definitely hit the spot.