I'd like to remind that this is entirely my own opinion and only based upon everything up to chapter 18. (Because there wasn't more published yet.)
Writing Quality:
Recogniseable the writing of an expirienced author.
Story Development:
This is a very Action driven Story, fast paced but comftable enough in speed to not get to quickly exhausted.
Character Design:
An opportunistic Demon with revenge Fantasies towards the gods that wronged him.
I am curious how he might change throughout the Story.
Update stability:
What's to say? The writer does still write, so good. I guess...
World Background:
The World grows gradually with the Maincharacters own reach. Starting small as a snail only to grow with him.
Summary:
Cute apex preditor snail is cute.
Imma give u 4.0 star only because of the the Yandere, I don't really like wish fulfilment fanfic and that nonsensical "berserker stick system" is just stupid!
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60 chapters in, I still don't understand even a speck of what is going on, no character makes sense, plotlines are convoluted and twisted, this whole "oh I'm a cannibal" thing never stops. I'm up for many things specially with evil MC, but one thing I just can't deal with is the pleasure of human meat. It's just absolutely upsetting. Oh and btw using a D20 dice although it sounds fun as a writer, it makes readers face too many confusing events.
Great story although i would reccommend the author that a better cover and name can do wonders for this story...............................................
At first I thought this would just be another run of the mill op story because of the title. Well I happy to say it is not the premise so far is really good although I don't no know how long it will last for before getting old. I hope this is one of the novel that keeps get translated.
As someone who may want to become a writer in the future. This novel portrays the difficulties of being a writer, and how to overcome them. It has real "expectations vs reality" examples, and several parts of the story relate to your very soul. I am thankful for stumbling upon this and hope to remember some of the great tips, and tricks discussed here!
So far the novel's absolutely AMAZING! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT!! unlike a lot of other novels with the tag 'kingdom building' this on actually focuses on it plus this wasn't some really slow paced novel where the Mc would have took 50 chapters to break the siege of his capital and another 150 or so chapters to finally regain control of his kingdom, all in all this is an absolutely fabulous novel with a very smart Mc who is talented in Kingdom building without a system and I hope you won't drop it. Also can you consider increasing the releasing of chapters or mass-releasing chapters?
well it did start off as a good novel but the first 5 chapters have soooooooooo much information missing and the characters arent even introduced good..things just happen in a blink of an eye????????????
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Wow 20 negative reviews got deleted upon release. The story is a drug, cheating, and rape story so have at it. MC gets cheated on hard, his girl gets addicted to drugs and fucks other guys. If that's what you are into then this is it cheif. NTR at it's stomache churning best.