THERE ARE SOME SPOILERS.
Nothing major just about how the mc acts and some reasons explaining the points of why I am wanting to drop. (Hopefully the author can clear some of it up?)
The two major problems for me that stand out above everything else, that is making me want to drop are, When does he stop becoming a slave to his "uncle"? I just cbf to waste any more time on this if doesn't stop soon. I mean he should already have his doubts about him already.
From all his supposed intelligence the mc was shown to have during the earlier chapters, it's baffling how he doesn't have some doubts. His town was supposedly killed by beasts but he is magically the only one still alive? He doesn't remember anything but when he does or tries to it is painful?
He should have had his doubts in his "uncle" considering these facts but still believe in him considering all the time they spent together. However, it should have become frighteningly clear that something is wrong after speaking to Lan.
Let's not forget what he called the uncle and even hinted at why. But the most important thing is he learnt about the soul/mental technique. He can make someone kill themselves, take their memories etc. This should have made it glaringly obvious and confirmed his doubts about something about his uncle is wrong. He should know that if he can do it, what is stopping an even stronger person doing it to him? Or is he so fcking arrogant to ignore this?
He should have realised that his supposed memory loss is because of a soul/mental technique. Then adding on all the other clues he has been given then he should rly be starting to doubt his "uncle" and start realising some of the truth...
However, it's like let's just ignore all that and keep the mc as a dog/slave/pet of the uncle. Make the mc seeth with rage everyone says something to discredit his master and be a good little pet and make him proud...
I honestly can't stand it and rly want the author to just get on with it. The whole memory, adding on with all these clues should have acc lead to something.
Another thing is the whole rage thing... I liked his other personality better. Where he didn't care about what others thought. Ignored them and only went after people who are directly after him. Now lately it's just been the mc acting like a fcking madman for no reason.
I'm guessing it's because of the scripture or his special body that is giving him the rage. It was mentioned it was half the rage and the other half was him the calm side so maybe he has a beast side?
However, how long does this last, when or does he reach a balance? I don't want to read about a psychopath madman that just wants to kill everything... compared to his first personality its a difference between night and day.
I dunno just cbf to read about an mc losing control constantly going on a rampage every time he fights... plus it always starts or ends with the mc always smiling EVERY SINGLE TIME. Like we get it he is crazy. Do you have to mention the smile that everyone notices but him every time he fights or about to battle??
But yeah, prefer the mc having some intelligence like it was made out he had but in reality, he doesn't...
Yeah, anyway gl to Author
The great Sloth, is a man of motivation, creating the most dynamic of characters with the flick of his pen, Keep your eye on this novel its sure to be a hit! Amazing story 10/10
This guy must really hate the other protagonist who can also summon 3000 angels to fight for him
A very nice and interesting story to read. And quite fun too. I myself would wholeheartedly recommend this piece of work :) :) :) :) :) :) :)
after reading first 15 chapters I give you summery.
Lin ye got pubg system.linye playing pubg.
linye shot gun. linye killed player x headshot.
bullet comments; linye is god, smug, blah,blah..etc
"nothing more from 15 chapters"
"read this review you can atleast skip fisrt 15 chapters.any way I can only help you like this .my jurny with this Book end here."
LINYE HEADSHOT PLAYER MITHUN
well it seems nice but I couldn't read past the first chapter they say their whole name every time and it something eastern cant tell if its chinese or Japanese but its their whole name every time even in chinese or japanese novels they do nt say the whole name! it makes it imposible for me to read
CLICHE is what I say
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Honestly quite horrible, granted tho I’ve seen worse. I can only assume those giving 5 star ratings aren’t native English speakers; or have received monetary compensation.
Grammar, sentencing structure and the overall storytelling is quite bad.
Now this is not me taking a shot at the author I commend you for trying, but readers should be given an honest account of what to expect.
My review applies to the first 12 chapters. Couldn’t handle more
Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.
Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.
Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.
Petition to bring back 60 trial chapters and 40 free to read chapters.
saya tidak suka EQ mc dalam melakukan sesuatu, dan hasil tanpa penjelasan yang rasional membuatku muak.
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Wow, this is a nice action story with good pace. The action scenes in the first chapter is nicely written, author kudos for that. And Logan, his character set up has left me completely in love with him. I badly want to know more about him, him fighting with cards just makes it more cool. And the fl is nice also, Nice story.
One of the best books that I have read! Firstly, the world building is made to be reminiscent of real world issues. This allows for the stories to be relatable for some, and draw attention to actual problems. The character depth is also very good. It makes the characters interesting individuals, rather than mindless cardboard cutouts as well as keeping them emotionally compelling.