It's been 30 chapters no fusion don't waste your time if you came for the fusion part of the novel..........................................
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Eu precebi que o autor esta reescrevendo sua historia e devo dizer que fiquei emocinado e feliz por tal feito...Os personagens eu amo ainda mais a Esposa Yandere e Tsundere Perigosa, minha preferida...Eu acredito que com o tempo ira melhorar assim como sua gramatica melhorou enormemente e a contagens de palavras aumentou...Estou satisfeito,
espero que continue assim
This has easily become one of my favorite novels here. Characters are well thought out and the story is not predictable and keeps your interest.
someone would have the raw name please
I would like to read a bit to get an opinion on this novel
So hello guys RogueAkon Here. I know many of you guys talking about the bad quality of the novel. Well, it is after all. So I also want to say you guys the problem is my language. I'm not very proficient in English even is it not my secondary language either far as tertiary I think. so of course the chapters I was writing were at are very basic level, maybe lower than that. But I want to say to you guys I was trying to improve myself with the chapters I was writing. Even sometimes I have to use a machine translater to add my words in a reliable format. Still, I hope, you guys can join the journey with me to the end of the story, and support me on the way. And the big Thank you to the readers who are reading my novel. And I'm very sorry for my poor writing skills as well, hope it can improve with the upcoming new chapters. Again thank you for your support and Have a Nice Day by the way. Let's meet at the new chapters then. I think!
this fantasy novel has really kept me up
I wait for every release,I appreciate the writer for his good works and I really think that this is one of best fantasy novel in webnovel recently and think its best to be a fan and wait for more release
good work for the writer
I love Sci-fi stories. It is still startlet, but still good. It isn't a complex story in which I have to remember things. The story is easy to follow. Love the story so far. keep it up
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The author has a way of writing which is really immersive and is flawless. I am impressed by the authors' writing skills...
The plot also seems decent so there is nothing wrong with giving this book a 5-star rating.
It's surprisingly not that bad. I just wanted to try something simulation type and at first, I thought MC was quite generic. You know, simp, low IQ, stubborn, lecherous, but I realised that I was too prejudiced. He reacted quite normally. I was just projecting my grievances with other novels on this MC. Like, he went back in time, but didn't know what to do with his money, so he chose to leave it in the bank for interest. Granted, it may not be the best use of money but it's definitely the safest. Also, he didn't let it get to his head and thought of setting limits on how to spend it so that he doesn't get carried away in the future. He is just a typical levelheaded ordinary guy. Also, he is pretty single minded and he was not extremely lecherous. He was quite pure. He didn't even kiss anyone properly in his two lives. I think some of the choices he makes due to impulsiveness gave me the wrong impression. Anyway, in these few chapters I have changed my opinion 180 degrees. ?
So far this book is a good read but please check your chapter placement you went form a boss fight to repet chapters. This make the store fall flat on it head.