There are few novels that inspire me to leave a comment and this is one of them. [Chapter 146] The novel is set in a dark environment, or let's say that's the vibe I feel when reading (an unsettling feeling if I'm honest), the MC is an intelligent person who calls himself paranoid (but that paranoia ends up being the warning of the storm), he has a colossal bad luck (you'll realize why when reading the novel), so far there is nothing that can be called a romance, not even a love in the making, the future is unforeseen.Conclusion: I like it, I feel it is a well-structured story in which even small amounts of information are conveyed to us that enrich our repertoire of knowledge.
Hey just wanna know are you still going to continue this novel? Its been 10days since you last updated the latest chapter. Sorry to bother you if you’re busy just wanna know if you doing well.
Hello, struggling author Romeru here. First of all, thank you for checking out my novel, love you guys. This is my 3rd contracted novel here and hoping 3rd time is the charm T_T So please do try and read it if you have time.As tradition, here is what to expect when reading my novel,The Good:1. I will do my unyielding best to be an author deserving to be at the top, even though we are currently at the bottom.2. I am your friend.The Reality:1. My main character is flawed and imperfect. He may be an apex badass, but there are moments when he is proven wrong. So if you are expecting a perfect MC who seem to always make the best decisions, you might not like this.2. Grammar mistakes. I tend to mix up my gender pronouns since they don't exist in my native language T_T3. Pacing will shift from time to time. Mostly fast, but when it is slow, it is slow.4. I don't write with an ending, so I am as clueless to the story as you are, we are in this journey, literally together.5. Plot holes - If we fall in them, we fall together. Always together.6. Character driven – The story will develop in a way that advances the story of the characters, MC or not.6. Inconsistencies – I have a very short memory span, so please do point out if I mistake what hair color one of the characters has.Here's what to do before reading this book:1. Play some music.2. If you are on the toilet, please wash your butt first.3. Shut your mind from from the notion of realism. I will try my best to be as realistic as possible, but there's only so much I could do when people could fly using magic swords.4. Please avoid comparing it from other novels, you might end up not enjoying the book.Other than that, I hope you enjoy reading :)
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Jajaj funny he was training to be the heir of his family since he was 2 years old, has killed people but he's too
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Writing quality - 3 stars
No obvious grammar mistakes... but the vocabulary is lackluster and monotonous... sentence structure is poor because it feels like reading a diary
(also author repeats mc name almost every paragraph and it is annoying)
Update stability - 3 stars
I'm neutral
Story development - 3 stars
The pacing is good... events flow in a logical manner ... but there is no suspense, no mystery (story is too predictable and scenes are too lukewarm)
Character design - 2 stars
Characters are generic having atmost two traits with nothing more to them and only mc changes... but the mc's change is contrary to his personality
(mc will go from callous to wishy-washy to depressed to determined in a span of three paragraphs...he is more emo than sasuke)
World background - 2 star
Rarely is a place named... there is almost no description of places... the rest is just like the real world with no creativity
(there is no immersion when i can't mentally picture the setting)
It is an interesting read at first but it quickly loses its momentum... the protagonist is dull, the setting is hard to imagine and the plot is far too obvious
Good to read once in a while to pass time but otherwise...
Meh... Just meh. The translation quality is realy REALY bad. This translation going premium is ripping people of. Stay away. I'm not a native english speaker myself but the translation is so bad I want to pull my hair out sometimes. Also the characters are all very shallow. All woman are portrayed as big breast, long legs etc. Nah... Better spend your precious time elsewhere.
so... hmm okay??? dunno what to say but for me the story is ok(love it(not to that level)), so waiting until to chapter 10? to review again?(if i'm not feel lazy or my shy nerves snap)
It’s actually actually surprisingly good. It’s too bad the summary makes it look like on of those losing money novels. Let me say this it’s not like that and it’s even has an lgbt character which is pretty good for these types of Chinese novels.
I’m here again, hoping that we can have a chance to work together and we are willing to pay you for distributing your work.The conditions should be generous. If you are interested, please contact me via this email:adaren06*@*gmail.com(delete *）, then I should take this opportunity to discuss it with you in details.