REVIEW
Narration: Decent and immersive
Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed
Character development: Nice and steady
Character design: Outstanding
Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike
Pacing: Not fast nor too slow
Writing quality: Magnificent
Execution of the Genre: Good pitch
Story potential: High
Updating Stability: Steady
MESSAGE
This is nich and nice man. Hope it gets the exposure it deserves! Congrats on winning WPC! Hehehe, I am waiting for it to reach a million views!
the story is about a dude who becomes a slave to a spoiled brat and he's fine with that he's not even mad when he becomes her servant he just like ya ok who cares about freedom all I will do for the rest of my life is serve my master and I am ok with that just a slave and his master that's the whole story
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This is indeed just the start and I might update after some time, but as of now, it is not so good. The start felt too rushed.
Honestly, the previous novel from this author had a much much better start and I would have given it a 5. This modified one just seems too easy and rushed. No system should be that easy IMO.
Hey Author, akar tum Indian ho toh jalti se chapters update karo.... I'm eagerly waiting for the update ... I wanna read more about this novel... Thank you will be waiting for the updates ..
A really funny novel, one of the most hilarious ones in recent times in trial read. Defo give a try.
This book was bad to put it simply i got to chapter 20 before i stopped .you can tell from how it starts that it going to be bad the mc is just plain stupid.
I just wanted to say that I really love your book, thanks so much for updating, your book is the best so far i have read, if i could actually pay for this, I won't mind spending every last penny of dollars i have left in my pocket! This book is a bomb! And i hope it gets recognized with success!
Fantastic! This book is immersive, interesting, and intelligently planned. I think this is one of the best cultivation book around.
Story is very hard to read at least early for me, it's a combination of questionable grammar and sentence structure, weird pacing and unexplained concepts. It felt really hard to immerse myself when I had to reread several paragraphs a chapter to try and understand what's going on and still end up asking "what's this? What's that? When was that explained?" the premise itself is very interesting and has potential for world building and maybe it gets better later but I couldn't force myself to push through it. In all this is in desperate need of an editor.
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Shameless review by author here.
There are many things than can be improved but I'll give five star to everything since the author is more or less as shameless as the MC here.