A promising plot and development. I'd say the few things are info overload. Sometimes I find my self getting a little lost with the descriptions of things because there's just so much technical information all at once. Grammar could be improved but I think the flow would be better as well once the info overload is sorted. Very promising, keep improving [img=recommend]
Anyone else remember the novel that got released with literally 1 vote while this one had like 5 million votes or something like that?
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I knocked a bit for the description grammar(haven't read yet I'll probably come back and edit after i read it but the premise looks interesting)
Written in this review is personal opinion no offense
When I've read the synopsis I thought it's good but the author keeps getting off track with the story and I can't emerse myself with it. So I'll stop reading it.
i didn't really get the first joke
but the other ones were good
i look forward that you will continue with new other ones in way that the genre that you chose is disliked here in webnovel
This story is great... Imagine a guy like me who had difficulty understanding in english, dig out the info of the deep words just to continue reading.This story will help you understand that world is not too easy.You think the street is beautiful? Haha, this story shows that its only a view..Have a nice read.
I don't know why author always leaves novel midway.i started enjoying author's novel but after some time author just leaves the novel for months without any chapters..
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I read a little bit, so maybe I'll update this review later, so far it's been a well written and interesting story with a protagonist who manages to be charismatic in his own way, finally, stop looking for negative reviews and start reading >:C
NOT RECOMMENDED .. MC takes a "Prostitute" who has slept with multiple men to satisfy her hunger as 2nd Harem member & this same MC was saying "not just anyone can become his Harem member" yet he goes and does this.
I love this book
Gonna Love it . . . I'm interested in my first time read this book. Thanks for the story, keep going. [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=recommend]