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I enjoy reading kingdom building novels and if I am fortunate to stumble across one I will try and give it a go and hope for something of merit. Sadly this one disappoints. It is a mishmash of tropes and ideas thrown into a basket and hopefully from that conglomerate something good is revealed. The MC is basically some ex librarian who is reborn with the title of king. He discovers he has access to technology from this mysterious book he can see with his minds eye. So begins to the story of a king trying to drag his kingdom out of the mud.So far this really reads badly, many grammar and spelling mistakes not attended to, vague reassurances of getting around to it one day, which shows less pride in the authors work. MC is rather shallow and mediocre in anything of note. I read references to his emaciated form which he hasn’t considered that he needs a new mind set to reflect a better person. His character is rather boring as he eyes off various women and is enthralled by his chief knight who I think was said to be 15 which was rather interesting to how she got that position at that age. He is betrothed or married to some younger Princess from another country and he still accepts sleeping on the floor. For one he could have taken a number of paths, one being my bed im sleeping here you can sleep where you want, two could be on the floor showing a subservient response, or finally sleep in another room. I am just not impressed with the MC at all to date.There are many glaring issues that should be addressed but after 60 odd chapters, I couldnt stomach it any more and chose to drop this.Needs far more research and perhaps reading of other similar novels to gain a better understanding. The approach seemed good but died after a while.
Really enjoying it right now I can see the story has a lot of potential Hope anyone checking it out gives it a chance
Pretty decent story, but the translation errors and various issues spoil it so hard. Also, only 20 free chapters, for something this poorly translated hurts.
ok i don't like the story write from 3rd pov like 80% of the time I like the story going just not this type story telling its hard for me to really going in to the book when it tell from that pov just to much monologue all the time this make me thing just like a children book my parents read it to me but I'm still Reading it just have to force my self with it??
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Great. I love these types of stories. I hope author can keep the pace because this is lit. Love the world building and Mc personality. Love the weapons as well.
The quality of the writing is very high. The world building is a bit different. And possibly the story becomes wonderful later, but I'm giving up on it because the first three chapters are a lot of work to wade through, and so far it looks like a lot of people are going to be angry with each other.
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Not much is known about the protagonist before his transmigration, so it’s difficult to see a proper reason for some of his actions.For a supposed serious gamer given a new chance at life, he is lacking in the planning department. He is also neglecting some of the skills inherited from the former host.The harem is bland. Very bland. Even the main girl is bland. All the other girls who were introduced quickly became background characters.Some actions by the higher ups are clearly forced for plot sake.We still know too little about the world he ended in. Feels like the author is making it up as the story advance.
NO ROMANCE?!?????HOW DARE YOU?!ROMANCE IS THE LIFE OF NOVEL!EVERY NOVEL IS INCOMPLETE IF THERE’S NO ROMANCE! ??????????????
Went through twelve chapters in one shot.It was a brilliantly written work in first-person POV. The system was a little shocking for me, but to those enjoying all the statistics, this is going to be a good read for you guys.Writing can be more refined as there are small mistakes here and there, but they hardly disturb your reading experience. Overall, this is a beautifully made novel worth reading.Looking forward to more chapters. Keep up the good work, author.(Quite a Wow-Cover btw.)