1. Writing is fast paced, the narration is stale and boring as well. the quality of the writing is a bit worse than many trial reads.
2. Story development how should I say it? just decent.
3. Won't say anything about updating stability. for now I will give five stars.
4. World background is decent as well just not good enough for me, it is stale.
The story is at its beginning but I do think it can become a great story. Perhaps I'm biased because the MC is a mage and a love mages, but still, keep up with the work.
I love this novel, it is short but it is shaping out to be a very interesting story, I also recommend to the writer to show the thoughts of the characters but that's about it good luck.
I Havent read a lot of novels in this app but i really appreciate that the mc is evil. Keep up the good work :)
This is my frist time commenting on a webnovel because this book annoys me the most. I binge read this novel because of the unique system and now I regret it. Sigh. Please add a harem tag. Seriously. MCs becomes the typical MC and every time a beautiful woman appears he helps them instead of sticking to the plot. And out of nowhere, his childhood sweetheart suddenly has a divine physique and the ghost lady suddenly has a royal bloodline. The strong captain "suddenly" has a strong interest in him so he can go to that island and get the inheritance. Are the women here just a tool to push the plot? How annoying.
Liked it thus far. Funny main characters and interesting plot.
Your writing is very enjoyable to read. Easy and smooth chapters that i can blaze through without too much of a hurdle. it isnt choppy either. The story have just begun, but the idea can blast off into many different ways. i love scifi stories. Keep it up!
i enjoyed this book, although i am waoting for the character to grow a bit more and not be pushed arouns as much. hope the updates come fast ;)
trigger warnings: sexual assault, sexism, cringe, and run on sentences.First, this novel doesn't deserve the high score it has. After reading Doomsday Pillars ( same author of Earth's Greatest Magus) I like kingdom building apocalypse novels. While I can forgive a few mistakes in writing here and there, the constant run on sentences make it difficult to read. Add spelling and grammar going out the window, and you've got a novel that feels like it wasn't even put through a basic word processor. Next, characters. MC is a typical OP dude, which I'm not against. And from what is being built in the narrative, a potential harem. Also not an automatic bad thing. But if your romance interests are literal prizes for quests who accept being kissed by a stranger they met not even a few minutes ago, I'm gonna have to call sexual assault. And no, having them resist at first then melt into the kiss doesn't count. That doesn't happen in the real world. The MC is cringe and bland. Even jokes about him being cringe fall flat. Let's not leave out the fact that he separated the men and women of the families he rescued to see if any of the men were "dead weight" by tossing them into the middle of a zombie apocalypse. Sure, he gave them sniper cover, but it really gave off a vibe of just letting them die till he remembered his new girlfriend might get upset at him if that happened. Even the men comment on this thinking it's fine that their lives are hanging by some random dudes want for his write in girlfriend. Did I forget that he literally wrote in some spam-esque survey for the situation of the novel and the love interests were just some celebrities he wanted to bang? Just "Who do you wanna be your girlfriend? Oh, XXXX celebrity cuz they are hot. Great! Here you go!"World-building is terrible. First, it was three months till the apocalypse. Then, it was 3 days. Then it was three hours. In total I think a little over two days went by till the apocalypse started. I say I think because it's hard to keep track with the terrible writing taking up brain space to decide what's going on. What could have been a great opportunity for setting up a novel where the MC has to be clever in gathering supplies, people, and other stuff to set up a good base is wasted. It feels like the author had an idea but didn't want to bother writing it. So we just get some random off screen reasons on why the timer goes down instead. TL;DR skip this novel. I've read better trash than this and still dropped those novels.
It is well writen. but if you expect an overpowered mc with a op system (from the tags and title) you might be dissapointed. not many other characters systems have been introduced so far (40 chapters in) but for a majority I have thought "I would probably prefer if this was the mcs system". It is rather slow paced so he might be op in another 100 chapters, I don't know. But a lot of other humans are seemingly more op than him (he is currently ranked 20th-30th on the global leaderboard). to me that goes against the definition of OP.
Finally get to enjoy this book in its original. After watching a bunch of drama made & remake, now enjoying the book of the proud wanderer! Recommend if haven’t read yet.