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It's a transmigration novel but as I have read most of the transmigration novels, usually the plot line never changes where a normal person get into a new body of royal or rich person but here in this novel, this is the twist becoz ML here being a king in previous life get transmigrate to be a novice.(poor guy)? He gets into the new world and will follow his dream he was not able to do as a king.This novel shows struggle, happiness, comedy, stingyness and many more emotions which add freshness to it so, readers who wants to try something new other then those clinche novel should definitely read this. And lemme tell u ML is not dumb, he is quite smart nd cute ??
INTERESTING AND UNIQUE!Though it's my first time reading a cultivator novel, I enjoyed it as I read the chapters. The plot is intriguing and the writing is easy to read. I also loved the idea, writing, character design and environment description in the novel. The synopsis is well written - short and to the point.The story is little slowly paced for me. The cover can also be made a little interesting. Apart from these, I loved everything about the novel.Keep Going!!
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TLDR: This is one of the best novels I have ever read. If you are comfortable with all of the tags on this book, I strongly urge you to read it as well.
Long Version: At 501 chapters as of reviewing this work, this is one of the best written, planned, and executed novels I have ever read. While action, systems, magic, abilities, romance, love, and harems can be difficult to write well this is a master craft in not only exectuing all of them, but combining them into a tale that is funny, heartwarming, fear inducing, and constantly evolving. The 18+ sections and potentially traumatic sections are marked well so that people not interested can skip them without missing too much context, while used effectively to inform the reader about characters moral such as those who do and do not ask for consent in romantic and sexual moments.
The characters are rich and three dimensional, ever character of importance has goals, dreams, and acts based upon them rather than being only plot devices. It feels like a developed world that we are just following this protagonist through. Each battle has a purpose, every person has a role to play, however short, and theg come together to create a story unlike any I have read.
The fights, abilities, and system are some of the best as well. They make sense in context of use, fights are one by picking good strategies and taking risks as necessary. Growth is observed Often through battles as well as time skips to center on the most important moments.
This is to the stories credit, as some novels feel extra long to make more money when barely anything happens or changes from the readers perspective. This novel has every word count, they all are important to the story whether for laughs, or to inspire awe. I have never felt that my money was spent for nothing. However that does not mean that the author barrels through things, rather they take their time at the moments that matter, and allow characters room to breathe, grow, and understand their relationships.
There are very few novels I have read throughout my life that I hold this esteem for, and most of them are fantasy classics. If after reading this review you are still unsure I urge you to at least try the free chapters, and see if it is for you. I truly hope you enjoy this book, and that you grow to love it just as much as I do.
I will be sure to update this every 500 chapters or so as long as I am reading. Thank you, author, for this book, and looking forward to reading more!
Well, that was very good. The story is very interesting, the development of events and characters was done more than wonderfully, the author may be a beginner, but he develops greatly with the development of events. keep it up brother!
this is very different from the majority of the novels on here, and that's very GOOD for me! A hidden gem and a new spin on superpowers !Nice characters. and I learn something new from reading this. I don't read regularly here but when I do, I always continue to read this one. This deserves support!
Well in my humble opinion, of course without offending anyone who thinks differently from my point of view, but also by looking at this matter in a different way and without fighting and by trying to make it clear, and by considering each and everyone's opinion, I honestly believe that I completely forgot what I was going to say
Super bad stuff! Full of racism and prejudice against other people not chinese.
A perfect novel for me. Those who want plot armor and those typical xiamxia cliche....Shooo shooo you don't belong here.
I wish they released more chap per day.
Its a cool idea, but it never give much explanation to it, and there are constant jumps in whats happening and things missing and it just isnt great quality
Extremely boring and bland, frankly just irritating to read. Was actually decent in my eyes until Xuan Yanran, weirdest pedo ever. I feel like the author himself realised how weird it was and tried to mitigate it in the next chapter. I think this because when she was introduce it was said she was 16 years old but then she became 10 years old, this is relevant because she likes the 10 day old MC.
Not to mention the pacing, its so slow, so so slow. I get its a slow cultivation world but when this man is creating heavenly phenomena to still be an infant and in body refinement at like chapter 28...... just do a time skip. The marriage annulment killed it for me I mean come on this Xiao Shui has done like nothing maybe you can argue his family is a bit annoying but the Mc just clowns on him for no reason at all. I just can't.
tldr: Slow and Boring
