The novel is just unique. The plotting and character development are quite good. The author is doing a great job. I strongly recommend this novel to everyone.
who wants to read a novel about some dude playing video games though
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I’d give an honest review. I really enjoy this book. It has a nice concept, good world building and the main character is well thought out. Most other characters don’t have much depth to them but it’s understandable, it’s a game with many players.
I would say that I didn’t like the story development that much. It’s the classic “new power up, stronger adversaries”. How can he clash with an ancient dragon here but is scared of a baby one there. He would fight toe to toe with the strongest people in one place but go somewhere else that should on the same level but meet much stronger opponents. I know it’s for the story but I don’t like it. He can’t be losing every other mental battle, how would any other person survive on the continent if that was the case.
I am also frustrated by the horrible editing further into the book, especially in the privileged chapters. These things make or break your book. Do better.
I would writing a book soon and I know my review may seem harsh, but take it as constructive criticism. I do like your book hence my incessant support.
i like 90% of this novel, the bad 10% is story skip,many times the mc is doing 1 thing then suddenly he is in another time and place, or he is doing 1 thing and in the next chapter he is in another time and place, becase of this i really wanted to give this novel a 1 star becase i cant read a novel like this, but since everything else is good about the novel then it wont be fair for the author so i will leave it at 4.4 rating, am dropping this novel but am willing to come back and read again if the author edit his novel from chapter 1 till the latest chapter, removing this story skip,
note:there is a difference between time skip and story skip, am fine with time skip as everyone else think its fine,but the author is not doing time skip he is doing story skip
I see a writeup with bright future here. you are doing well , the story development is okay, it captivated me at first sight, but the only downside to your work is the lack of a stable update. you should try and improve in your updates. howbeit, this is a great work.
i'm looking forward to seeing the writer and his novel improve.
This brother greets the author. The author,
other than being a hater of using gaps between sentences and being hated by Wn, not being allowed to get his book voted at times, is really putting hard work to make the background interesting but with a mysterious vibe that makes you want to know what else there is to the world, the characters are also better than majority of novels, please keep up the hard work with this chuuni love child of yours.
when are you going to update this story?
It's going on the right direction
No kid wish fullfillment with a harem of 500 virgins
Try to lead the plot through innovative and original ways and not make him a victim that suffer and follow the flow.
I don't know if you can go full racist (chinese does it in most modern novel against the japan though) but it could be fun.
five star for just being a fresh thing not an average system novel or average reincarnation just hope it sustains the quality
i think true readers of this app wouldn't vote it as it slightly out of their iq scope
no picking but i will read the mtl anyway i have long lost hope of any trail read that i like to be even picked
I loved this book, although at first I had problems reading it as English is not my first language but after a while I started to understand more and more words.
Woah Nice.
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Through the 65 chs that have been published so far this story hasn’t disappointed at all … interesting world with lots of potential history and lore to be unearthed, solid MC and heroines whose characters are developing nicely, villains with unclear motivations, and a novel (at least to me) power system that I’m curious to see more of.
Please read and support so the author can write many many more chapters for everyone to enjoy.