Demiurge_Ohara
The author forgot many things after reaching 400 chapters. The Stories became more and more annoying to read. The novel described mc to be smart and scheming but in reality he just an overpower idiot
looking forward to a new horror story but from the setup of this being a bus full of college students I can't imagine this being a very long story compared to other novels. Could someone tell me how long this novel is in raws?
Shameless Author review! :OOOO >:(((
I hope Y'all Are enjoying the story as it goes on, I'm A newbie writer so Any tips on how I can make the story better are appreciated!
Though I haven‘t finished reading all of the current chapters I can tell, this is gonna be a good book!
It’s a really interesting story, you have xianxia elements along with some cool technological stuff. The Mc has been shown to have a very mysterious past and cool abilities so far. Id definitely recommend giving it a read.
The character design and the frequent updates are a definitely good and the way he built the background for the world was good as well, the names are definitely better than what I've seen in most novels.
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No words for this novel
Well-written novel. A welcome change from the 'average' xianxia novel. Has all the pro's of Japanese novels with none of the cons (strange MC thought process with crazy harem). MC's character is deep and realistic, and the other characters aren't 1-D characters either. Even if you aren't into romance, I recommend giving the novel a spin, as there is a 'cultivation' aspect in this world, and there is more action in the later chapters!
AND I FUCKING THINK THAT THE AUTHOR HAVE NO WOMAN! AND THE AUTHOR EVEN PLAGIARIZED MY BEAUTIFUL CEO WIFE! THE FUCK IS THE AUTHORS PROBLEM! PLEASE DON'T READ THE STORY IT'S SO CRAPPY
it is one of my favorites novel evey especially the charater nature, the way he call and think him self the king of kings of god is the best
