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Some stories are eternal, and while writers don’t necessarily repeat them word-for-word through the generations, they are capable of crafting compelling echoes that evoke both the time we’re in and the universal emotional constants of humanity. Evoking that sense of universality...
Very nice story, It is very interesting how the plot might turn out, suspenseful enough to keep you wanting the next chapter. I am not a big fan of romance , so I think it is fine without much like it is in this novel. lots of fights are good. it is nice to see that the mc has a personality and is not just strong, although his personality does bite him back some bits.
This is an interesting story. It, however, is moved mostly like dialogue with little description in it. Personally, I would like it described to me and not coming out and telling me directly.For example: In the first chapter, why do the maids think the young master is drunk? Could it be the smell? The author could elaborate on that and improve the story.I do hope that the author continues this.
I love stories like this. I love transhumanism and futurism and this story gives a lot of it. The characters are fairly good, if sometimes inconsistent. The story itself was very promising in the beginning, but lately I’ve been feeling that the author has been nerfing and intentionally retarding the story for the sake of aimlessly running around in circles with redundant storylines...hell sometimes I fell that Dax is becoming a secondary character at this rate. Also I feel conflicted with the cover art, I always imagined Dax as more...’inhuman’, I don’t hate it, but my Dax was always somewhat of a blend of a Turian from Mass Effect and a Human-ish figures - kinda like a fleshier turian, with digitigrade legs and all. Also the Empire seems to be using very technologically disparate equipment, they posses nanotech that’s on the level of flipping magic and can’t get widespread DEWs and relativistic KKVs up and running by using that nanotech.
Do not be confused by this 3*I would have no problem recommending someone this book. Is this a "must read"? no I wouldnt say so. There are some key moments that the author kinda seems to skip over which leads to a kind of confusing plot and character development. However I wouldnt be surprised at all if this author was writing 4 or 5 star material by his next novel or even this one. He/she gets a lot of things right in my opinion.Heres more specific feedback1. I wish I could see the character changing, instead of the end results. I kind of missed the specific moments where he evolves emotionally, then I get told later that it did. 2. The perspectives of the different characters do a lot here. Its completely underutilized in other novels and I cannot express how much I appreciate it. It helps me understand how the character is influencing the world around him. Thanm you author. 3. emotional extremes. kick him while hes down, hype him when hes supposed to win. While I think its been going fine so far, imo it could be taken a step farther. That one could totally be personal preference though.
Wow, this is really good ?????? great job Author ❤️❤️❤️ you really did your work of catching the reader's attention with your first chapters. Well I'm already hooked, can't wait to see how the story progresses.
It is a good read for some idle time pass,, it is evident that it has been deeply influenced by 'Dual cultivation' novel but after entering the sect and massage arc, it is fully copied. Isn't the author afraid of copyright infringement... ?u200d??u200d?
Hello author i glad it you always this novel.I study in IT universitas, and like programing.Hope you novel good always.Hope MC not to bad, not to Silly.Succes for your novel
This novel is legit amazing. Comedy, character development, fast pace. The only thing which would make this novel more amazing would be to no include a harem. SPOLIER - Currently the has a OP wife, if this were to turn into a harem you know their relationship development would become slow run of the mill novel relationship. If the MC were to stay loyal to his wife I just feel like the story would progress better
I’m giving this novel a max rating in the hopes that it garners more attention. It has almost perfect English and is well-written with few plotholes, yet it’s less popular a lot of the complete garbage. It’s not perfect, but for what its worth, I feel safe in calling this a hidden gem
The starter point is very nice and I have to congratulate the author cause it's a really good novel at all, I think everyone that like cultivation must try this novel