i tried to read it but its just not for me there may be people who enjoy it but i just cant do without a decent plot.........................
END IS HERE...oh I like that... author improved his grammar compared to his previous novel...and grammar mistakes are little to none. Nice starting, so far good. It's a type of novel which action mixed with lite gore(I am not of fan of it though). So far story is normal and no plottwists or something make it say wow. but it's nice novel. World background is same as modern so there's nothing to say but author writing about surroundings is good. Character development is nice and like that MC don't become douche bag after apocalypse started like mc in god and devil world. Hope that he won't become douchebag. Nice work author.
A chance encounter with Q results in the crew of the Enterprise switching personalities and abilities. Picard is now obsessed with honor, Worf is a neurotic scientist, Wesley is a mature and levelheaded counselor, and Q himself is exploring his newfound humanity. But while the rest of the cast explore their new emotional and physical natures, trouble is brewing in Engineering, as a malevolent consciousness has awoken in the now Omnipotent Data.
Read until chapter 39.
Started with a good premisse, but then it became your usual cultivation novel, but worse because there seems to be no real challenge.
Ratings explanations:
Bad translation, sometimes confusing.
Stability, not enough samples to review.
Story. It started ok, a few odd points but mostly ok. Then the quality dropped A LOT, out of nowhere.
Character design: MC makes no sense, acts in contradictory ways sometimes. Some of the other characters are ok, some are badly written.
World background: almost nothing established so far, the little that was exposed isn’t really good.
Overall I wouldn’t recommend it.
Very good writing quality but very poor story design . There is no sense of anticipation in the first half of the story because of the synopsis.
Genuinly good cultivation story. The game elements are almost not there. Its like MC has reality and extra life in paralel universe where he can respawn after death and learn how to cultivate in reality.
I read the novel to the evd in raws and it was good untill last chapter but... I did not realize it was last chapter untill I read authors finishing words. For me it felt like novel was cut off on 3/4 and left unfinished.
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Its okay, though needs more chapters as 60 really aren't enough to fully immerse in the story though sadly it might've dropped from the trial read which is very regrettable
The first few sentences really describes me: humble, easy-going, unrivaled. Without me, the world would truly be a dark place, as dark as the eternal night.
All complements to author aside, This book should have 700+ characters, maybe much more. Hopefully they will be uploaded here in time.
Mc seems overpowered at first, but his opponents later are even more OP monsters so the battles are decently balanced. He is a bit of an as%, but that’s typical for most Chinese characters.
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The harem... all female characters are properly developed, you can actually see it happen for real.
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Summons are awesome, but cultivation system seesm a bit convoluted. it works in the end, but you have to break your brain a bit first.
This is the second novel I read from the author. I haven't finished reading this novel, but I have to say the story is engrossing and it deserves a good review and attention! jiayou, author!!!